Reviews for Naughty Secrets
ChristyWIX chapter 12 . 8/29/2017
That went so much better. I liked that she was willing to listen to him and didn't keep running feommhim. I really liked that they both admitted to loving the other one. I loved that she said just because they had the dressing room it wasn't over. That they would be sitting down and discussing this. Gotta love a strong Bella. They do need to fix it. Both love the everyday versions of each other. And, they love the naughty nighttime versions too. I hope he noticed in her rant, that she only did it for him and him alone. Except when they both performed that one time. Wait until he learns she only did it because her car broke down. And he only did it becaus his bank balance got too low that he couldn't pay for this trip. I liked hem in this chapter. I like thatbthey are going to talk more too.
ChristyWIX chapter 11 . 8/29/2017
Well that backfired in a very painful way. Ouch.
ChristyWIX chapter 10 . 8/29/2017
I've never done a cruise. Quite frankly, I'd love to do a Disney cruise out of Florida. I'm very frightened of cruises though. The way they breed that Norovirus, freaks me out. My FIL has caught it twice in cruises. Although, I've never heard of Disney having this issue. I digress. Sounds like Bella made a very full day of the ship. She really explored t. I loved that he was looking everywhere for her. Even sent Brittany and her new friends searching. Very cute. A first date! Woo-Hoo! That was very sweet and I look forward to more with this cruise. I very much liked what he had to say.
ChristyWIX chapter 9 . 8/29/2017
Being in his head for the shopping was fun. He kept being shocked at the amount of money she was pulling out and spending. He'll figure it out eventually. I liked that he wanted to drive her around everywhere. That was very sweet of him. I get a weird feeling that her car is going to break down at the very worst time. Wolf Boy will either be after her or, he will be the one that finds her broken down. I liked that Edward found her erotica and it turned him on. That drive is a whole lot longer than the hours you mentioned. They are staying in my neck of the woods. I was born, raised and still live in the San Francisco Bay Area. San Francisco until I was three, Pacifica until I was thirty and San Bruno the last twenty years. Wonder when these two are going to put two and two together? I thought they would the minute that had sex but, that was proven wrong. I loved the sex they had, it was all kinds of sexy hot. It was fun being in his head for it too. Yummy!
ChristyWIX chapter 8 . 8/29/2017
Very much enjoyed this chaoter. I love that Alice and Bella hit it off so well. Found it very cute that both Jasper and Edward got a rise from the girls taste testing on one another. Edward licking Bella was fantastic! Him running the hell out of there was funny. I was very happy they all had dinner together and a very fun filled night. Bella's car being broken again, was not good. Is the garage Jake's? And, did he figure out who she is? Purposely breaking it so she has to keep going back there. Loved that she turned to Edward for help. We know that Alice and Jasper would've answered their door, dark house or not. However, this was delicious. Him helping her and them spending the night together. Wrapped up in each other's arms, yay! And, it seems he didn't mind at all taking her to Seattle. I think he wants to spend more time with her too. I like that she's thinking of stopping Heidi's for Edward. She already put Dante and Shy Boy as the same person. If she can connect the final piece together, Edward is all three people, she won't have to give it up. Maybe even keep up some of those live shows.
ChristyWIX chapter 7 . 8/29/2017
Okay, if he only had $82 in his account and the money he made from his romp at Heidi's will just barely cover his trip, where did the money come from to pay for him to see Izzy? I did really like that his subconscious finally realized that Bella and Izzy are one in the same. Even if his conscious mind refused to put the two together. I very much liked that they are spending a period together getting to know one another. Still don't get how she does not recognize his voice at all. I really, really hope that he sees her swan tattoo while on their trip. Be it from her coming out of the shower or, her bathing suit doesn't hide it. Either way, I want them having sex with the real Bella and Edward while on their trip. Or, beforehand even. I think they should start doing the shows together each Friday night too. He would gladly give up his solo performances, to have the real thing. It they do shows together on Friday's, neither would have to run back to sleep for school the next day. And, they would both still be feeding their fantasies.
ChristyWIX chapter 6 . 8/29/2017
That was so very hot, what they did. Too bad they didn't know what we know. All the men she just described at the very bottom, Mr. Cullen, Shy Boy and Dante, were the same man. She has no idea . . . and neither does he . . . that their fantasy people are right in front of their faces.
ChristyWIX chapter 5 . 8/29/2017
It is a little funny that he had no idea his weekly shows were costing him that much. He figured that the gas and food were adding up but, I guess he didn't figure on the cost of those performances. I'm sad that they are going to have sex for their first time as virtual strangers, in lieu of knowing who each one is. And, in front of people. She's still in her mask and I imagine he'll be in one as well. My three questions from the last review are still running through my brain. I guess I'm supposed to put the disbelief on hold for fictions sake? A mask works about as well as Clark Kent's glasses not revealing Superman to the masses. Plus, they've got to recognize each other's voices. They definitely should, when they have sex . . . except, Marcus just told him not to speak. I'm sure it'll be hot but, I'm still sad to learn it is all a ruse.
ChristyWIX chapter 4 . 8/29/2017
Wolf Boy, guessing from the name is Jake, freaks me out and I think they need to be really careful. Maybe even her wearing a red wig going into and out of the place. What if she's the only long haired brunette that pops in there? He'd know it was her and may do something to her. He's not stable with the way her blew up in there. And, they revoked his membership, which had to add fuel to the fire. Too scary. Loved the conversation shared with Jasper, Bella and Mr. Cullen. One, how are they not recognizing each other's voices? That speaker is one and they've spoken a few times. Two, she got him that cuff, that he most likely will wear to school. She'll see it and know it's him. Third, does she not know his first name is Edward? She refers to him always as Mr. Cullen, not Edward. That scene she did for Shy Boy, was fantastic. Very sexy. He loved it. Funny that she saw him at the gas station and followed him home.
ChristyWIX chapter 3 . 8/29/2017
It seems that Kate may be Bella's best friend. I think from the way everyone was talking through this, that Bella managed to break up with Mike finally. Yay! However, I was right and Edward has never noticed Bella before. Hmmm. I liked Kate, and I was glad Edward seemed to have made a friend in her. Although, if she gets back together with Garrett, I don't think he will be that friendly with Edward. It was interesting that it seems that Edward suggested a way for Kate to tell Bella how to get the guy she is interested in to notice her. And, it is him. I am looking forward to the day he finds out that 'plain' Bella, is far from it. That she is not the 'good girl' she perceives the the people. At least not since five months back. Looks like Heidi may lose a performer and a customer when that does happen. Actually, I think those two would like if she still did the performing and he the watching. ;)
ChristyWIX chapter 2 . 8/29/2017
Ugh, if she is that unhappy with Mike, why is she still with him. She seems miserable. Not to mention Edward is single and she has the hots for him. Although, he doesn't seem to notice her. I do wonder though if Edward's Alice, the one that got the VIP access for Emmett, that Edward used, is the same friend that Bella referenced when she spoke of the store in Port Angeles?
ChristyWIX chapter 1 . 8/29/2017
Very different and quite sexy. Color me intrigued.
cullen2798 chapter 23 . 6/1/2017
This is definitely a new favourite! I'm really glad I cane across it! Thanks for writing it!
nessa01 chapter 23 . 1/30/2017
Omg that was an amazing story! ! ! I am so glad that they got their happy ever after! !

Thank you for writing this amazing story for us to read! ! !
EdwardLoverForever13 chapter 23 . 9/25/2016
Loved this story! It was so good!
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