Reviews for Naughty Secrets |
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![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! Loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I never really liked Eduard before. This story made me see the relationship working. It was very romantic. Thank you. I just wish there had been more latex... lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story, i enjoyed it so much. I can't believe i missed it for so long, i think you should make it as complete so that more people can read it as it's too good to miss. Thank you for sharing it with us. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! Thanks for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Did Bella really think that a man in his forties wouldn't still want to have love in his life? I have to feel for Leah though! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved how Bella dealt with Carlisle! The wedding was perfect. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm presuming Jake has taken her. I don't envy Edward having to tell Charlie what his little girl has been getting up to! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So they both are happy and realise they wanted it! I can't wait to see what the reaction will be from their families! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh God! They got married and don't remember it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() He really is a hypocrite! |
![]() ![]() ![]() She's starting to join the dots but is he? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm enjoying this so far! |
![]() ![]() Hi, I really am enjoying this story. And this Bella is sweet and wild, and strong. The performances are so hot, and the lemons are very well written! However, I didn't like the way Edward took in the surprise of Bella and Izzy being the same person. I understand the need to run and think through everything. But, I feel that his views of men 'defiling her' was taking Bella's agency away from her. More than just that, I felt that his whole approach was patronizing and not recognizing her agency. Who cares how many people have seen her naked? That shouldn't be the point! I usually like it when Edward is protective and jealous, but here I felt that he was a bit of an asshole and, Bella's right, hypocritical too. Thank you for writing this story! I am liking it, and you've done a great job. Thank you! Best, -A reader whose phone isn't letting her sign in. |
![]() ![]() I tried to read this! Interesting premise! But the over use of exclamation points, really bothered me! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely loved that story! all I can really say is wow that was fantastic, it is absolutely my favorite story to date that I have ever real! thank you for sharing that beautiful, sweet, and erotic story i loved it! Melissa |