|Reviews for Stumbling|
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/17/2014
perfect perfect perfect perfect. Spot on Alistair, spot on emotional resonance, fantastic work!
| Dr34ming chapter 2 . 10/28/2011
Alistair is so...adorable and sweet...and perfect. Loved it.
| olivegbg chapter 2 . 9/17/2011
This is probably the loveliest romance scene I've read so far.
| cirruscastle chapter 1 . 3/21/2011
What I like best about this is the way it explains how the quest to meet Alistair's sister is a cataclyst that really brings the two surviving Grey Wardens of Ostagar together. I've never thought of it this way before, that losing the last chance at having a family related by blood might make Alistair think of other types of family.
| kinsley5 chapter 2 . 8/27/2010
Love it. Well written. Well done.
| obsydiandreams chapter 2 . 7/12/2010
wow... just wow... this is beautiful. I really like how you portray them. the comfort and everything. heh, this is, i think, the sort of thing that everone looks for...
thank you. :) you've made my night.
| obsydiandreams chapter 1 . 7/12/2010
i love this... not the least of the reasons are because it doesn't necessarily portray alistair as the lovesick puppy that he sometimes comes off as. :)
| tmelange chapter 2 . 12/11/2009
Love the happiness. Bravo!
| Beautiful Wednesday chapter 2 . 12/10/2009
This is the best kind of almost-fluff; a little angst, a little laughter and just a little steamy! ;) Beautifully written and a wonderful interpretation of the short scenes Bioware gave us!
| Antigone2283 chapter 2 . 12/9/2009
*giggles gleefully and reads it again*
| Antigone2283 chapter 1 . 12/9/2009
It's the little details in your writing that I really enjoy, like, "her hand finding the break in his armor at his elbow and gripping his arm firmly, reassuring." Something so simple creates so much more depth and vividness.
| Midnight Hawk chapter 2 . 12/5/2009
Very in character dialog (and sometime writing Alistair right is tricky) and hot smoochings. I like!
| waiting4morning chapter 2 . 11/29/2009
Love this. Game fic writers sometimes have issues fitting actual dialogue from the games into their stories, but you manage to do this seamlessly. I read your version on what Alistair or the PC was thinking and it seems so natural, as if the dialogue was originally yours and not Mr. Gaider's. Very well done.
| sleepingrose chapter 2 . 11/19/2009
I'm almost done with this game and I have to say i love Alistar! This is really well done!
| K. M. Anderson chapter 2 . 11/18/2009
I don't know what more to say but: Wow! Very well written.