Reviews for Care to Take it to the Ring?
Closet lover chapter 3 . 9/13/2014
Plot has potential. I'm glad that you changed the narrative style of chapter one, since it was in my opinion complete garbage. It got better, but not much. I don't like how there's to much attention focused of Sasuke and Sakura, it seems completely unrealistic and furthermore the writing doesn't pull it off. The pacing is all wrong too, and the character development is sloppy at best. The plot idea is pretty cliche, but like I said before it has so much potential to be different that I'm not shooting this down yet. Sorry, I honestly didn't like it and I'm trying to bring constructive criticism, I'm sorry if it's failed.
hama431 chapter 3 . 7/25/2014
Update
DeadlyDelirium chapter 3 . 8/7/2011
UPDAAATE!
Jezzi1996 chapter 3 . 3/30/2011
This story is really good! I hope you update again soon!
luckienumberten chapter 3 . 11/6/2010
oooooooooooo! i want more!
WikiaClub chapter 3 . 10/9/2010
Update Soon!
WikiaClub chapter 1 . 10/9/2010
WoW!
Strawberry Bells chapter 1 . 8/13/2010
Sasuke broke her heart.
Mizuki-chan Uchiha chapter 3 . 7/4/2010
Hehe! That was awesome! Update soon! Pm me!
Morganaftw chapter 3 . 2/22/2010
brill loved it updaite soom lol x 3
BrazillianCherryBlossom chapter 3 . 2/19/2010
omg i know you kinda dont like me because i kinda sorta wll did take your story but i am sorry i just came up wtha big idea but its not like yours yours will anways be the best and i will make sure on evry singal chapter i make will hve your name in it telling pople you were the one who created the base and most of the story and trust m your writeing is way better then mine i have like horrib spelling anyway i love your story please continue please and dont be mad i love your story and to me u are the bst writer in fannfiction
DarkenedAngelxX chapter 3 . 2/18/2010
I rly like ur plot, cant wait to read more, hope ull update soon!
UchihaYukiLuna chapter 3 . 2/17/2010
Hey )

Good story!
zetsuboukatt chapter 3 . 2/9/2010
UPDATE. Or i'll eat your face.

It's so good
zetsuboukatt chapter 2 . 2/9/2010
Good good good

GREAT!
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