|Reviews for The New Supervillain on the Block|
| EclipseIllusion chapter 1 . 2/12/2010
I don't know if I'm the most experienced person to review your story, simply because I don't know that much about the Marvel universe. Especially since I don't know the cannonical character you're referring to.
Anyway, I'm not entirely sure if you are supposed to shouw sounds the way you did, but I'm not sure. I am able to get a picture of what the characters are doing without having too much description. I think you did a really great job of leading the characters to the ending.
I don't have any complaints really. The only thing I saw that was wrong was near the end of the story, the very end, you left a set of quotation marks off of the thrid paragraph ending. That kind of threw me for a minute.
Other than that, this is a great read.
| Clownwithachainsaw chapter 1 . 12/1/2009
Well done on covering the basics of how to make a decent supervillain. I like how you made a fictional non-protagonist police officer smart for once. That was a great scene where he just shot him.