Reviews for Initiation of Fire
Carlalalita chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
Woohoo!

Got to say, I loved it!

Not just the heat, but the depth that you gave Taranee and Nigel!

Grand Kudos!

Cheers!
Muffin'sback chapter 1 . 5/20/2010
Erh wow... Very hot! :)
yellow 14 chapter 1 . 11/27/2009
Certainly a hot fic. Keep writing.
koolkame chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
It looks like I'm one of the first to review and I'm a little nervous about that, but not because I didn't enjoy your story. Because it wasn't well-written, don't get me wrong and it was so.. detailed. Very detailed. I haven't read Happily Ever After All so I just took the one-shot on its own merits (Hay Lin is a pervert? Huh.)

Ha, even my one-track gutter mind was blown at the description of the "initiation" and I'm still not sure what to think. I can say it was well-written, that's for sure, with the dialogue being smooth and clever and the descriptions being, ah, imaginative and vivid. I wasn't turned-on so much as entranced I guess at the progression of events. Best thing I can say is good job, keep up the stellar work and I'll check out Happily Ever After All when I get the chance.

Okay, two things that I could have done without: Taranee "tasting" Nigel's flavor and Luba and Halinor peeping on them? Those made me shudder, sorry.