|Reviews for Last Moments|
| flow chapter 1 . 5/25/2010
I don't mind the story line but honestly that is not anything like what it is like when someone has cancer and that really took away from the entire story.
| Yellow Gummybear chapter 1 . 5/21/2010
That was... T_T
WHY? Eiji-senpai doesn't deserve to die like that~ T_T
*cries in a corner*
Oh, excellent story, by the way. Only... Our teacher had cancer, and when our other teacher told us what happened... I think you should've not written that scene in the game because cancer's supposed to hurt... A lot. Before you die.
BUT STILL GREAT STORY YOU MADE ME CRY T_T
| tokyo girl 05 chapter 1 . 11/21/2009
Ohh wow. Sad nya~
I agree it's a bit unrealistic~ ack and reminded me of my nan...though no one TOLD me, I just over heard, about her final moments. Apparently she sat up and started coughing and throwing up blood...jus the thought is ...Q_Q
But no stupid cancer can't Eiji away! Rawr! Stick him on chemo as well~ doctors should have caught it earlier. Tch. Poor Oishi nya~
| Mizunoshine chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
Pretty optimistic, I'd say. I saw one of my relatives dying of cancer - she definitely hadn't been able to bounce around *days* before her death. Days before her death, she didn't even recognise anyone anymore... And she was a very tough person, I assure you. But the final stage is extremely nasty and painful, so your setting is pretty unrealistic.
But I kind of like your writing style. (Sorry for the harsh comment, it just still upsets me a bit, reading such stories. ; A warning would have been nice.)