Reviews for Breathe
Starzki chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
This is one of my favorite Roy/Riza moments. I think you got into Riza's characterization in this scene very well. There's a lot going on with feelings, both physical and emotional, and I think you tackled all of them in a terrific way. Very nice.
MoonStarDutchess chapter 1 . 11/17/2009
Lovely writing.
BlackBrightField2007 chapter 1 . 11/17/2009
nice fic! please continue your good work!
tedlibear chapter 1 . 11/17/2009
I must say this is a great retelling of several scenes of probably one of Arakawa's greatest chapters from Riza's POV. beautiful work! :D
afinedenouement chapter 1 . 11/17/2009
I'm surprised more people aren't writing about chapter 101. This piece was wonderful. Oh so much.