Reviews for Newcomers of the Damned
Jack Craiddial chapter 1 . 1/18/2012
first off, great start! you really introduce the characters well, as well as what appears to be the main struggle, Wolf needing money. however, i would advise you to work on two things: firstly, add a little more description to your work. some anecdotes, observation on nature or structures, and especially people. another area to work on is not sticking too closely to story, i.e., say 'canned food' instead of 'tourists delight'.

don't be discouraged, however! this story shows real promise and the potential to be a great read.

keep writing!
MorsTactica chapter 9 . 7/18/2011
Did this Ded? XD But to be serious this is a great story. There aren't enough STALKER fanfics out there.
von Rhettenstien chapter 9 . 4/11/2011
Very nice chappy. Can hardly wait for more.
Tilt chapter 8 . 10/30/2010
So far so good. Keep it up.
furandguns chapter 8 . 10/4/2010
Good to know it isn't dead in here.

Digging the story now that it ain't at a dead end.
electro moonlight chapter 8 . 10/4/2010
uhoh bloodsuckers lol
VonRhettenstien chapter 7 . 4/27/2010
WOW. Flash was a really cool guy, but I guess it couldn't be helped. Plus Tolik catches another bullet... dude has the worst luck.
VonRhettenstien chapter 6 . 4/13/2010
Hacky is the kind of guy that you just wanna punch in the face with his bs about being such a veteren and shit. He sure talks a big game, but I wonder if he really is the real deal. Oh well, still dig the story. If only the chappys were a bit longe.
von Rhettenstien chapter 5 . 2/18/2010
very interesting
von Rhettenstien chapter 4 . 1/18/2010
sweet, things are getting interesting.
von Rhettenstien chapter 3 . 1/11/2010
Nice chappy! Hacky doesn't seem too bad, but at the same time he has to be there for more than just to be a white knight, while Roksana is a bit of a pain in the ass. Still it's interesting seeing where this story goes.