|Reviews for Corruption|
| Evani chapter 1 . 9/5/2014
This makes me afraid for my sanity for liking this, I'll keep with the opinion that it's your fabulous writing that enabled the Non brain damage haha. I have to say that I feel bad for you to have read twilight
| 1sunfun chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
| Jarick chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
You. Are. Amazing! This story is making me wanna find even more stories where Orochimaru kills/possesses Sasuke, and isn't a gay pedophile, and instead is a normal pedophile. C: Could you pleeeeeeaaaase continue this story?
| Selias chapter 1 . 2/3/2011
Just searched for Orochimaru crossovers, and this was one of the few good ones I found. It's a really interesting idea. I hope for more in the future!
| UberRandom chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
OH M GEE! you have to make a sequel to this: or instead of writing multiple sequels, just write a story in chapter form? This is amazing and totally original!
ps. WHEN (not if) you write another one, could you please message me? Otherwise i will forgwt XD
| Inoue Orihime15 chapter 1 . 7/13/2010
I found the sequel! And it was just as weird as the first.
| Tammy chapter 1 . 7/2/2010
Wow, never thought to say this, but while I read bubblesgum expecting to be totally squicked, I LIKED it.
OMG you made me like pedolicious... I should probably go bury myself in the back yard now...and not ask so very kindly if you plan to write a third fic this year?
But as I have many things left to do, I shall not bury myself, and will instead go re-read your lovely HPatHC fic that turned me onto your writing... And actually ask that, perhaps, the next fic could be 3-5 years later, and show Bubbles love becoming something, besides Sensei-student?
Though Westermarck might have been an issue, Orochimaru *avoided* Bubbles in close contact from her side till after she was 6. As it is... this entire fic is no creepier than that Twilight - uhhh wait you like twilight... *bites tongue and tries so hard to be nice* Uh than that whole ending to twilight. *cough*
Anywho, can you tell I liked it? I did. And I worship you for being so brave as to write it... and then actually post it!
| MikaZuki Blood-AngelofDarkness chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
wow.. u need another 2 add 2 this. its pretty amusing
| Lord Blood chapter 1 . 1/21/2010
m when i first found this story and its prequel, i thought it'd be a lot darker. i found neither this or the bubblesgum to be violent or gory at all.
and i dont see the pedophilia either...
honestly, i think this and its prequel could be turned into an interesting story. one where orochimaru takes out akatsuki with the help of bubbles and then takes over the world. of course, such a story should be only a few chapters long, but eh, it'd still be interesting to read.
| the girl who talks annoyingly chapter 1 . 12/8/2009
this is good in the fucked up since, but can you fix it? cause she Can NOT be in the dark forever.
| Inumaru12 chapter 1 . 12/8/2009
*spasms* I thought you did well for Bubbles. :D It was a great sequel and i still really liked it. Great job on it.
| NightmareSyndrom chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
It was pretty good, but I think I prefer the original just for introducing me to this crack pairing.
My one question is, will there be a sequal to this sequal?
| Araceil chapter 1 . 11/21/2009
(Sadface) nu, Naru died! And Orochimaru has mind fucked Bubbles quite completely. And your poor braincells!
| TerraBull chapter 1 . 11/18/2009
Naruto gone? Hmm.. will he come back?
Some others may not like him being dead.
Thanks for writing.
| Nemrith of Fictionpress chapter 1 . 11/18/2009
I think that Bubbles is justified in being angsty. After all, she has learned a great deal from Orochimaru, and that has created a rift between her, and her sisters. She has grown alot in so short of a time, but considering her mentor is... old, this sort of maturity is expected. People can be forced to grow faster than they normally would, if they were given the right incentives or teaching. Good Job SoS. Too bad about Twilight frying your brain, I had the same problem when I was reading it. I would have liked to see some of your work from NaNoWriMo (I always seem to want to add a Ni, after Na so it always appears to me to be Nani NoWriMo) a joke I'm sure you'll get, however it's not very good, is it?