|Reviews for Improper|
| aurora0914 chapter 1 . 11/24/2013
That was really really really really cute. And hot. And awesome. PLEASE MAKE MORE NEJIHINA! A SEQUEEEEEEL!
| NejiHina fangirl chapter 1 . 9/30/2013
OMG! I was practically squealing throughout the story! It is so well-written and all...I think this is the best NejiHina I've ever read. Absolutely loved it.
| Fenris Jin chapter 1 . 4/29/2013
I'm not really a big yaoi fan.. I find myself wallowing in great fangirl grief at such notions.. but Naruto and Sasuke hooking up together instead of with billboard brow is actually more appreciated on my part.. Am I considered evil if such were the case? XD
Moving on.. Goodness me, even Hinata's expletives were so proper.. Neji! You on the other hand have such a potty mouth! XD
Neat read.. I love it. XD
| Simple Daisy chapter 1 . 9/4/2011
| cloudsandsilvers chapter 1 . 4/27/2011
love it : seeing neji so improper really is sexy :)) love how you wrote the characters here :) it's like their still in character but out of character at the same time.
| Jaque Weasley chapter 1 . 1/6/2011
oh gosh, perfect **
| Sammi-lou chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
its a great story but i dont understand why its rated M when nothing bad happened
| NinjaSheik chapter 1 . 12/11/2010
| Musichowler chapter 1 . 11/25/2010
It was hot and made me smile. Well done. ;-p
| LadyBardock chapter 1 . 11/21/2010
This is not complete :) Please come back and continue!
| Sequel yeah chapter 1 . 11/16/2010
WHAT? You're planning on ending there? Oh c'mooooooonn..you CAN'T do that! This story's too juicy and smexy and crucial and so fired-up just to be left at that. :O You got me reading at a climactic pace and BAM!-it ends there..? Oh please CONSIDER writing a sequel for this.. Please, please? :D
Loved it really. To simply put it. Haha.
Keep up the good work
| lovingo0Kawaii0oGirl chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
tnx for writin it!
| The Shine Queen chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
| DJ Maimai chapter 1 . 8/18/2010
This story needs a sequal... In fact, I demand one.
That's right, DEMAND. If you don't continue it I'll...I'll...ummmm...Set my army of evil flying monkeys on you! Yes! That's exactly what I'll do, and you do NOT want that. Trust me.
So there, now you have to.
| Qualia Des chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
Very, very sexy!