Reviews for Pirate Uzumaki
couch2200 chapter 4 . 9/21
Living forever was doflimingo's thing that's why he wanted law's devil fruit because it was rumored that the user could give up his life for another and that person would gain eternal youth
nenopip chapter 19 . 8/9
Well you lost me at how submissive Naruto is to the shinigami.
ice D gun chapter 1 . 7/27
please update soon...
agrave chapter 21 . 7/3
Brilliant story, hope you continue it!
Z chapter 10 . 4/13
Sorry if this sounds rude, but your spelling and grammar are terrible. For example you use witch instead of which. Witch is an evil lady that flys a broom. I think you need to take some English classes so you can learn how to write properly, and know which words to use. Aside from the spelling and grammar the story is good so far but i think you need to add more details and continue to write this story. Also you need to know where to place commas because i don't see any at all. This is just some constructive criticism and I hope it helped. ~ Z
Namikaze Uzumaki Potter chapter 21 . 3/4
Awesome chapter.
Guest chapter 21 . 3/1
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BlackFox987 chapter 21 . 2/25
Hope this story isn't abandoned, good story :)
BingeReader97 chapter 17 . 2/21
I've kept a very sharp eye open for anything that says English isn't your native language. I can't find anything that says this. You have no excuse for the excruciatingly horrible grammar.
jinsoju chapter 2 . 1/31
I'm pretty sure naruto has laughed like that before... When he was shy
fenixrojo36 chapter 21 . 11/28/2016
Sigue con la historia
Travis cross chapter 21 . 11/24/2016
Ridgy Cgh
akix058 chapter 21 . 11/24/2016
Even if 4 years have passed since you last updated this story I still hope for an update... best one piecenaruto crossover imo
NeKo19-94 chapter 21 . 11/1/2016
Next plis
Excited Reader chapter 5 . 10/30/2016
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