Reviews for Prince and me
PM27 chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
OK story but hard to read as there were no paragraphs. Can you put the story into paragraphs next time? Btw, I said OK because the girl sort of seemed to annoy me as she seemed too perfect to actually get into the story (a bit like Bella in New Moon by Stephanie Meyer if you ever read the book) ;) .
mdprincess chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
pleassssseeeeeeeeee update soooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnn
mdprincess chapter 1 . 5/4/2011
omg such a good story dont even care if there r no paragraphs it seem like a great story so far please please write more
Brianna Thomas chapter 1 . 4/13/2010
Hey this story is great could you please finish it so I can know what happened next
Rasberry Parfait chapter 1 . 4/1/2010
I couldn't read this. I saw the massive wall o' text and just said "No."

The thing is, when you have whole chapters in one blurb like that, it intimidates the reader. It makes it look like there's more than there is and we say "...I can't do this."

What you need to do is break it up into paragraphs. That way they'll be spaces along the way and it won't look so scary.
crazyninjachicks chapter 1 . 1/15/2010
I love the movie the prince and me.

please up date soon!

BoredumKilledTheBeast chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
I like it alot but it was hard to keep my place with all the chapter put in without any spaces. Can't wait for the next chapter.