|Reviews for Drowning|
| Lost cause chapter 8 . 6/22/2012
I was reading Child's Play but you took that down so I started reading this instead. It's very angsty and fluffy. I feel bad for Flash for being treated like a child. He already feels like he can't fill Barry's shoes. I hope I can read more.
| victorionious chapter 8 . 4/21/2012
Ha, this was really good! I don't really ship any Flash pairings, and I'll admit to being fairly squicked at the thought of most J'onn pairings, but this worked really well! They're so cute in this chapter!
| victorionious chapter 5 . 4/21/2012
...that was unrelated to the story. That was to do with FREAKING GETTING RID OF WALLY! He's my FAVORITE of the Flashes! WHAT THE HECK? I think I'm gonna go cry now...
But the story's pretty good.
| Bat-dove chapter 7 . 1/21/2012
Like this story. Enjoyed the true comments at the bottom about authors. Please continue writing even if it's not this story.
| subaru1999 chapter 8 . 1/16/2012
What an amazing story! I truly loved this story and you have made me fall in love with J'onn/Wally. I would have never have thought that pairing was possible before but you made it impressively in character. The story was a good balance of emotions and Wally's humor was believable. My favorite part was the very end. Thank you for the wonderful story!
| MechaMai chapter 8 . 1/14/2012
So glad you got round to completing this story! Really enjoyed J'ohn/Wally relationship, had my doutes at first but was won over by the end of ch. 2.;) loved how you've portrayed them both. A good read on so many levels, are there likely to be any follow up stories from this?
Keep at it!
This actually DID make me laugh out load :D
"Batman would have been a copy cat of Wonder Woman's statue imitation if it were not for that nervous tic forming under his right eye. (Wally mentally pumped a fist into the air even if the tic was purely hypothetical on his part what with Batman's concealing cowl...but he knew it just had to be there!)"
| Rye chapter 8 . 1/13/2012
I loved the story, and really enjoy that you pair Wally with a lot of different characters.
| AidenSurvival chapter 8 . 1/8/2012
Let the ceremony begin!
Thanks for the great read!
| Rain in the Dark chapter 8 . 1/7/2012
*Sits staring at the monitor for a long time, not quite believing what she's seeing*
I love this story so much and I'm SO glad to see it continue eventually. And I simply adore your Wally.
Is it J'ohn's own brand of humour, or is he learning from the Flash? For some reason I have this picture in my mind (of J'ohn pretending to be clueless about human traditions and stuff only to make people purposefully uncomfortable).
Thanks for the update!
| Harte-Lore chapter 7 . 12/21/2011
I'm sorry, but I love the story. A lot.
It really is unique- one of my favourite characters is J'onn, and you really brought his character to life. You also managed to give Wally depth, unlike other stories, which portrasy him as a brainless prankster or a broken, angst-ridden teenager. You gave him balance.
I'm sad to see that you won't be posting up anymore, but I wanted to let you know I liked what's been put up. I'm just one of those people that goes through the whole thing and then leaves a massive review at the end XD.
I'm sorry you don't think posting the story is worth it, but I'll respect that and I won't go bugging for new chapters.
| BrowneyedShamer chapter 7 . 12/18/2011
What! WHAT! Ok wow I just got here and holy shut I love this and damn now I'm pissed! I understand why you quit but could u reconsider! Maybe people where busy or it was mercury in retrograde! Hahah that always messes with me but here my review! I love it but am so pissed there's no more so I plan to visit ur other stories!
| Supermoi chapter 7 . 11/29/2011
Awwww, that last bit made me all mushy inside That was cute and sexy in a chaste sense XD
| Supermoi chapter 4 . 11/29/2011
Funny :) I guess that FLash would have some trouble after being almost cuts to pieces...
| Supermoi chapter 1 . 11/29/2011
OMG that was so good! I loved it! The pairing's a little weird and all, but I loved it nonetheless! It was so well written!
| Julie chapter 7 . 11/22/2011
Out of all of the portrayals of Wally West I like yours the best. He's not stupid, he's not a true slut and for goodness sake he's not scared for no reason.
I like how you go into the psychological effects and not just cut and paste action scenes. Although I confess, I am interested to see what you could do with a purely action scene. My guess, awesomeness would ensue.
Keep writing, I know how frustrating it can be.