|Reviews for Drowning|
| Harte-Lore chapter 7 . 12/21/2011
I'm sorry, but I love the story. A lot.
It really is unique- one of my favourite characters is J'onn, and you really brought his character to life. You also managed to give Wally depth, unlike other stories, which portrasy him as a brainless prankster or a broken, angst-ridden teenager. You gave him balance.
I'm sad to see that you won't be posting up anymore, but I wanted to let you know I liked what's been put up. I'm just one of those people that goes through the whole thing and then leaves a massive review at the end XD.
I'm sorry you don't think posting the story is worth it, but I'll respect that and I won't go bugging for new chapters.
| BrowneyedShamer chapter 7 . 12/18/2011
What! WHAT! Ok wow I just got here and holy shut I love this and damn now I'm pissed! I understand why you quit but could u reconsider! Maybe people where busy or it was mercury in retrograde! Hahah that always messes with me but here my review! I love it but am so pissed there's no more so I plan to visit ur other stories!
| Supermoi chapter 7 . 11/29/2011
Awwww, that last bit made me all mushy inside That was cute and sexy in a chaste sense XD
| Supermoi chapter 4 . 11/29/2011
Funny :) I guess that FLash would have some trouble after being almost cuts to pieces...
| Supermoi chapter 1 . 11/29/2011
OMG that was so good! I loved it! The pairing's a little weird and all, but I loved it nonetheless! It was so well written!
| Julie chapter 7 . 11/22/2011
Out of all of the portrayals of Wally West I like yours the best. He's not stupid, he's not a true slut and for goodness sake he's not scared for no reason.
I like how you go into the psychological effects and not just cut and paste action scenes. Although I confess, I am interested to see what you could do with a purely action scene. My guess, awesomeness would ensue.
Keep writing, I know how frustrating it can be.
| Ish chapter 7 . 11/3/2011
Awww, I'm sorry you didn't get any reviews before. I've only just discovered the DC fandom, let alone this amazing story.
I suppose I will be content with this portion of it.
Unfinished or no, this is one of the best fics I've read, and you have made me into a J'onn/Wally shipper.
| love-toushi chapter 7 . 10/30/2011
I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story XD sometimes when you switch point of views it gets a little confusing but other then that it's awesome XD
| Cat in the web chapter 7 . 10/26/2011
I think this story is beautiful and well written. Even if you stop here, it is a good fanfic.
| Kotetsu T. Kaburagi chapter 7 . 10/11/2011
Sorry it took so long to read/review this and that I missed it on 6. I've been dealing with my DC friends and their drama on gaia for like two weeks and been sick in that time so reading anything would make my head sear with pain. I liked this story though and the others too. Keep up the good work Kyer
| tcadmiral chapter 7 . 10/10/2011
Well, I didn't really agree with your rant but whatevs, I want more chapters! So, you've done a good job so far on the story. Occasionally I'm confused as to whether Wally is interacting with Batman or J'onn but I've figured it out. So, update soon!
| Ashcola17 chapter 7 . 10/7/2011
Really? your not going to finish this? oh come on its sooooo good. you just cant end it
| Nerdy Ninja in Training chapter 7 . 10/6/2011
I loved this chapter and I know what ya mean by the reviews part. I finally have my stories up (not as good as yours) And got like 700 something hits in one of my stories and only got like 11 or 12 so far...:( That pretty muchs makes me feel depressed...
| Nerdy Ninja in Training chapter 6 . 10/6/2011
This is an amazing chapter. And Alfred really cracks me up
| Unkillable Cockroach chapter 7 . 10/6/2011
Okay, I know what you mean about leaving no reviews or feedback, (GD lazy reader syndrome. It's spreading) and I'm more then happy to give you my opinion on your story. Admittedly, I rarely read stories which have a non-humor genre, but seeing as this has Wally West in it and it's YOU writing it (no mega-sucking up here. I'm dead serious that I like your style and portrayal of the -IMHO-Bestest Man Alive)
It's sad that you are not continuing this story, since I'm hooked. I must say, I'm a tad disappointed about the last chapter due to the shortness, but nonetheless, it has been an interesting read.
Abrupt ending aside, despite the minor typos, the concept and storyline was fun to read, however, I find Wonder Woman a little neglected in some of your fics? Otherwise, congrats on another well done story.
Bear in mind, this unkillable cockroach will always be watching, waiting and reviewing for possible updates of this and others of your Wally West fics. Thanks for the read, and hope your family problems gets better.