Reviews for The Last One Bites The Dust
3.1415927 chapter 1 . 11/18/2009
Cool. A little random, but I like random.
Thisaccontisnowclosed chapter 1 . 11/18/2009
V. good so far but it was little short. THere's nothing wrong with short stories but I suggest for your story that the chapters should have at leat 1,0 words minimum. Keep going!

-Midnight