Reviews for Where the Shadows Lie |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I am happy with this old novel, you write very well. Gandalf is my favorite character and you wrote his story so great I didn't want it to end. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay but wow you're such a good freaking writer. This fic is brilliant, well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() No one destroy the ring. I would appreciate if you gave me an good reason why Gandalf was able to. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Arwen is not a princess, elrond is not a king. Common knowledge dammit. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this perfectly paced plot,with all its cliffhangers and surprises,is AWESOME. Waiting for more;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god, thank you for the wonderful journey you served us. I'm so grateful i found your story in the middle of night and did not regret a little bit that i lost my sleep time to read this. I've been obsessed with story like what if another character has to use the Ring to defeat Sauron. You satisfy me. Once again, i thank you for making this and write it till the end. I hope you will start writting more about LOTR in the future. |
![]() ![]() I like your execution of this idea, it's appropriately horrible. However, it'd be nice if you inserted an indication of a character point-of-view change, just for clarity for the reader. |
![]() ![]() Why would Sauron kill Gandalf's body? He would just go to the Halls of Mandos and potentially heal and return. Ainur can't be completely destroyed, otherwise Morgoth would not have just been exiled to the Void. |
![]() ![]() This isn't a huge problem, but I notice that you keep spelling Saruman as Saurman. |
![]() ![]() This is an interesting idea, but it would be easier to read if you put some kind of mark when it switches between scenes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I googled many parts of your story. I googled for a few hours trying to find your story. It is awesome enough that I did all that just to find it. I went through many pages of lotr fanfiction pages trying to find yours. And find it I did. Thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() An old story and certainly not a bad one. What keeps it from becoming a good story is your inability or unwillingness to properly spell given names: Saruman, not Saurman; Halbarad, not Halabard. It's annoying, detracting and in the end just plain sloppy. 5.5/10. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story and a fairly happy ending. Sorry about Sam. He was a good Hobbit. |
![]() ![]() Kindly learn to spell "Aragorn" correctly. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful story, and awesomely written! |