| Reviews for Where the Shadows Lie |
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   Onch Sing chapter 27 . 8/18/2023 I am happy with this old novel, you write very well. Gandalf is my favorite character and you wrote his story so great I didn't want it to end. |
| playonworlds chapter 5 . 10/29/2020 Okay but wow you're such a good freaking writer. This fic is brilliant, well done! |
| saoyuuki12 chapter 25 . 9/27/2020 No one destroy the ring. I would appreciate if you gave me an good reason why Gandalf was able to. |
| saoyuuki12 chapter 4 . 9/17/2020 Arwen is not a princess, elrond is not a king. Common knowledge dammit. |
| Arasulgil chapter 27 . 8/19/2018 I love this perfectly paced plot,with all its cliffhangers and surprises,is AWESOME. Waiting for more;) |
| Come to Darkside chapter 28 . 10/26/2017 Oh my god, thank you for the wonderful journey you served us. I'm so grateful i found your story in the middle of night and did not regret a little bit that i lost my sleep time to read this. I've been obsessed with story like what if another character has to use the Ring to defeat Sauron. You satisfy me. Once again, i thank you for making this and write it till the end. I hope you will start writting more about LOTR in the future. |
| Anon chapter 8 . 5/1/2015 I like your execution of this idea, it's appropriately horrible. However, it'd be nice if you inserted an indication of a character point-of-view change, just for clarity for the reader. |
| Whyhow chapter 16 . 4/13/2015 Why would Sauron kill Gandalf's body? He would just go to the Halls of Mandos and potentially heal and return. Ainur can't be completely destroyed, otherwise Morgoth would not have just been exiled to the Void. |
| Whyhow chapter 15 . 4/13/2015 This isn't a huge problem, but I notice that you keep spelling Saruman as Saurman. |
| Whyhow chapter 10 . 4/13/2015 This is an interesting idea, but it would be easier to read if you put some kind of mark when it switches between scenes. |
| guitarlover56784 chapter 28 . 10/1/2014 I googled many parts of your story. I googled for a few hours trying to find your story. It is awesome enough that I did all that just to find it. I went through many pages of lotr fanfiction pages trying to find yours. And find it I did. Thank you |
| jvankessel chapter 27 . 6/1/2014 An old story and certainly not a bad one. What keeps it from becoming a good story is your inability or unwillingness to properly spell given names: Saruman, not Saurman; Halbarad, not Halabard. It's annoying, detracting and in the end just plain sloppy. 5.5/10. |
| gginsc chapter 26 . 2/24/2014 Great story and a fairly happy ending. Sorry about Sam. He was a good Hobbit. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/8/2013 Kindly learn to spell "Aragorn" correctly. |
| Nearing Midnight chapter 28 . 12/2/2013 Beautiful story, and awesomely written! |