Reviews for Drums
bran4ever chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
I love it! I love the idea and I love the way emotions blended with the storyline. It's beautiful! They're a little rough around the edges, but they make sense and the story fits. I love the last to lines of the Doctor's sonnet. I just love the way the words roll and slide into place in the Master's sonnet. The lines fit more precisely in the Doctor's sonnet, but the words flow better in the Master's. I love the adjectives and the descriptive nature of the sonnets. The Doctor's sonnet focuses more on the past. The Master's is more focused on what is to come. This really makes sense and lets the story tell itself. There is animosity, but also a sense of completeness. The Doctor speaks to the Master and vise versa. I'm going to go read some of the other pieces! Write some more, PLEASE!
themidnightfiles chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
I wish I were in your English class! Very fun, and innovative :)