Reviews for The Young Order: Octo Secui
jessiewiz101 chapter 22 . 12/15/2016
Awesome story! just like the last 2 :D But did Severus forget about there 3 way mirrors from the first story?
spiffy2143 chapter 22 . 11/22/2016
I LOVE THIS STORY! You are an amazing writer. I really hope you keep on with this story!
Seraphina Luna-Lilly Snape chapter 22 . 8/23/2016
I love this series so much. I hope you add the next installment soon
rowenasheir chapter 21 . 5/2/2016
Why dont you just write the sequel instead of changing it into epistolary style? You seem to be getting stuck? Cant review the last chapter twice!
Lollypops101 chapter 22 . 2/14/2016
Great series! I hope you end up posting the next story soon. I will temporarily put you on my alert list until then.

Also, why did you bring in Zippophones? While I love the idea, Harry, Draco, Sev, and Remus have their mirrors.
roni2010 chapter 22 . 10/15/2015
great job on the various characters' personalities and story!
Sweet Verona chapter 22 . 9/18/2015
I love your stories! I can't Wait for the next instalment in you young order series. Your oc's are dynamic and interesting.

I hope you find time in the business of life to add your next instalments to the site.
rowenasheir chapter 22 . 5/16/2015
what happened to the 4th chapter of the series?
FandomGirlzzzzz chapter 7 . 3/25/2015
One thing I've noticed is that you always make Latin titles. Why? I'm not criticizing or anything, but it's still a little weird!
luzhasswag chapter 22 . 2/25/2015
takingitinstride chapter 22 . 4/28/2014
Love this series so far. Excited to see where it will go!
mysinger chapter 22 . 3/7/2014
Fantastic story! I have really enjoyed this series and the way you have developed these characters and their relationships. I especially like the relationship between Severus and his boys. I would never have thought of Severus as father to a de-aged Sirius, but you really made it work. It was good to see that bitter relationship healed, even to the extent of Siri wanting Snape's name. Well done! I look forward to the next story in the series.
lilyflower50 chapter 19 . 1/12/2014
I would love to see this finished could you have voldie die in the graveyard
B00kw0rm92 chapter 22 . 10/15/2013
Amazing chapter!
Margot chapter 7 . 10/12/2013
I'm really sorry and I definitely like your story very much (I think it' an original plot, and you didn't gave to alter the characters as much as in 'Thrice Defied' so it works very well) especially the deaging that I thought very fitting. But: your cousin might want to revise her French a bit ! It always amuses me a lot when authors put bits of French in their stories- I guess the language is attractive, even though it's too difficult to actually learn. Dedicated to dozens of ff authors: NO, Voldemort does not mean 'flight from death' but 'flight OF death'. Well, it might, but it is a very farfetched interpretation. So. You took the brunt of the chauvinistic outburst that was overdue for months, sorry ! Again, great stories
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