Reviews for Heat
JuneGilbertVivianRaeven chapter 1 . 11/14/2012
Eeeeee! So cute and funny :3 I love it. Such a Carly move, dancing around in her underwear! Hahahaha and the Crow bit was funny too XD I can just imagine Crow doing that when he was little... Oh so silly! XDDDD
Hysterical Insanity chapter 1 . 12/18/2010
This is hilarious! Love it!

AppleJacklover17 chapter 1 . 10/18/2010
*snorts then laughs* Birdbrain in his boxers? I'd pay to see that!

I bet he looks like a putz. Then again, Jack probably isn't much better! (in other words: FUNNY!)
everyoneisMISunderstood chapter 1 . 6/22/2010
Crow dancing in his underwear was not a mental image I needed XD

This was cute though :)
Xenriel chapter 1 . 5/21/2010
This is...funny, cute and sweet in a way only Jack Atlas could pull off. Nice _
MegumiSaiga chapter 1 . 4/7/2010
(At first: Sorry for my bad English...! )

Oh wow, this was so cute! x3

I loved that scene, when Carly was dancing around and Jack came into her room...

..I would like to know, what he was thinking in that moment ._. xD

And I also think, that the way how the two acted and spoke to each other was very close to their behavior in the original series... good work! :)

I hope you'll write more about them soon! x3 (I'm also reading your story 'The Blood of Kings' :3)

Sending you some friendly greetings~

Megumi-chan :3
jenuinetears chapter 1 . 3/27/2010
very nice and cute. the bit about crow dancing gave me a laugh. :) I really liked it!
Shikamaru's Twin chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
I really like this fic. I can actually imagine Carly dancing in her underwear. And it's making me crave creamsicles but we have no room for them in the freezer T.T
JackxCarlyloved chapter 1 . 2/11/2010
WOW that was so awsome I love it so much it was so funny please make more!
leah chapter 1 . 12/22/2009
DAT WOZ FUXKIN AWESOME! Make more, this cool.
Peach Wookiee chapter 1 . 11/25/2009
I just about died laughing at the image of her dancing around and then freaking out when Jack walked through the door. This is great!
Animad345 chapter 1 . 11/23/2009
Hahaha! That made me laugh out loud about Crow xD

That was a very sweet story :) I loved it! :D
Fenikkusu Ai chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
Carly dancing in her underwear seems like something she would actually do! This fic is just so good. I like how well Jack takes it.