|Reviews for Criss Cross Lines|
| Evidence Murderer chapter 1 . 4/14/2014
Fiction MA, adult content with explicit sexual or violent situations, is not allowed on FFn. Please take down "Criss Cross Lines" and repost on another site. (If you don't know where to post it, AdultFanFiction and Archive Of Our Own both allow these types of works.)
| Bushwah chapter 1 . 2/3/2014
Byakuran scares me, I realize, but without resentment. I will simply have to learn to revel in my own fear.
| RoxanneTheGreat chapter 1 . 7/27/2013
B-Byakuran b-bottomed?! *passes out*
| nina chapter 1 . 1/6/2012
amazingly in character. :)
| Devilis Kyuu chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
Love this fic! Kya you write amazingly!
| QueenofDiamondss chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
I don't know about you but I think Byakun did everything right.
| Bel's Hime-Sama chapter 1 . 3/18/2010
LOVED IT TO DEATH
| MSYOU chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
Damn you can't win with that guy D: but somehow I can't shake off how romantic his reasons/actions tend to be *sigh* I really love this :D I hope too see more 10051 from you soon :D
| Liv chapter 1 . 2/1/2010
ah i loved it! Your writing is amazing :)
and i love 10051 pairing :) 3
But its so sad... because Byakuran is so human around Shou-chan TT-TT no
makes me not want him 2 be defeated. ajidfjas;kdfj;kl /3
| hollyivy7 chapter 1 . 12/21/2009
| turtlelikelemon chapter 1 . 11/24/2009
tsk sometimes im just so speechless on
byakuran's part of their relationship..
can't decide if he's the good one or the bad one..
and this is one of those times..
i really loved this one shot!
i really hope they end up together!
| Highend chapter 1 . 11/24/2009
I squee'd and sobbed at the same time for the both of them. ;;
And got some weird looks from the people outside bringing their leaves into my backyard, like, one guy knocked on the window and I started blubbering about how bad it was that Shouichi did this, but didn't, and ooh.
Totally faving this and forcing my squeamish friends to read it.
x 2893752 etc etc.
| Laptop Newbie chapter 1 . 11/21/2009
Wow, you considered nearly every detail as it goes on. Unique and well-written. Didn't know Byakuran could be so human yet not OOC at all. You accomplished that more than once, great job xD
| BloodyNeutral chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
.. you are the master of 10051-fanfiction. XD 3
| Nilaexn chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
YOU. I LOVE YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS. D