Reviews for Long Walks on the Beach
Guest chapter 1 . 9/1/2013
This is the best Bellice fic hands down.
Shsway chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
So sweet and to the point. And the "second date" stuff is just killer.
Yazzy6 chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
I love the "undying declarations of love were only expressed after the second date." hahaha that really made me laugh for some reason
fan-rei chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
sweet. thank you for sharing. i liked it.
Myrddin le Fay chapter 1 . 3/2/2011
Cool!
Beguile the Sun chapter 1 . 12/8/2010
Very, very cute. A pleasant read I must say. I enjoyed it immensely.
amUous chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
Wow again :)
O. N. Labbit chapter 1 . 4/23/2010
You have such a wonderfully descriptive way of writing. I loved the ending: It was only a first date.

You are an excellent writer, Bern.

Great little One-Shot!

~Labbit :)
antisocialgod chapter 1 . 12/12/2009
This is so cute and nice, I totally think it should've been bigger. So maybe you can consider it? :)

Anyway, lovely reading, thanks for sharing!
Reader-Rabbit93 chapter 1 . 11/28/2009
Wow cool.
MadDelight chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
this was so cute. hardly ever do i like alice/bella when they are both vampires. but this?

sheer wonderfulness.
pearlsnpolos16 chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
Loved it, can't wait to see what else is to come.
Jocelyn Torrent chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
Aw, I loved it! Adorable. Everything was seriously adorable from Alice's strange logic to Bella's explanation of how they would progress. And of course, this line:

"But even if she had retained the ability to express it, she wasn't allowed to, because undying declarations of love were only permitted after the second date."

I wanted to hug them lol. And hey, this was almost 1,0 words! You're closer to your novel yet :P

Jocelyn
morte206 chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
LOL I guess undying declerations of love have to wait for the second date when you already live together and therefor have no need for a U-haul.

Very cute, thank you for sharing.
VogueThousand chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
I love Bella and Alice together, they are so perfect for each other.

Great job !
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