Reviews for Maelstrom Storms Heaven
Foxy-kun chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
great work, looking forward to the next chapter and yoruichi's reaction to finding out who naruto is.
bashking chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
nice start looking forward to

the next chapter
Eterguy chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
Well I myself think it's a Great start and wouldl ove to see more of the story!

Ciaossu

-Eterguy
kyunaru chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
when is the next chapter going to be out.
nim istar chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
beyond some spelling and grammatical errors, i could find nothing wrong. the story has an interesting plot, and the time line you've chosen to introduce naruto is fairly uncommon for naruto/bleach stories. overall a good beginning, i hope to see more.
dragonjay87 chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
a very good start to a story like this keep it up.
spedclass chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!
Loquartz chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
Definitely one of my favorite story. Great opening, the flow is good. Better finish this story before dumping your keyboard away haha. Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter. goo...-d, I mean great job. 2 Thumbs up XD, keep it going
Wolves Creed chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
this is promising keep going
origin of summoners chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
so the timeline for this fic is over 200 years maybe even 400 before the start of bleach correct. it does look like it will be intersting. will naruto find out about his parents and what will happen to his old world since naruto is now dead what will happen when they come to soul society.
rayz chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
update!

please update...

i loved your concept...

i really liked the naruto yoruichi moment their... so cute...

update! it's a must!
7500fx chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
I like it! The story is gonna be great and I can't wait to read more!
Icecoolgirl chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
I can say that...

I love it and looking foward on what come's next.
Monkey D Dragon chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
good chapter update soon
HikariNoTenshi-San chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
Purple flower on...Dog shit? XD Funny. UPDATE!
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