|Reviews for Police Call|
| Reyal Cobusia chapter 1 . 2/10/2010
I like this, well actually I kind of like most of your writings, but anyway, I think that this story was nice and good for a laugh. However, I'm pretty sure that the word "Yami" means dark/darkness rather than black which I'm sure is "Kuro." Either way though it works, perhaps a bit more so with how the character is and her relatives.
You didn't do it here, but at times I have noticed that you sometimes type Sakon rather than Ukon, there are also some other easily missed typos, but like I said, they are easily missed.
Well keep up the good work, I'll be reading.
| Ability King KK chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
Even though I've never heard of "Ayatsuri Sakon", this made me laugh. You just have to feel sorry for Atsuo.
Jinta just loves to cause trouble doesn't he?
| chiharuSAICHI chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
Wow. Very unexpected crossover. But hey! Who knows maybe that happen to Urahara's shop a lot. Anyway, nice story!
| Evilhumour Author chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
a little confusing in the middle. and i hate the aunt, in the good character way.