Reviews for Police Call
Reyal Cobusia chapter 1 . 2/10/2010
I like this, well actually I kind of like most of your writings, but anyway, I think that this story was nice and good for a laugh. However, I'm pretty sure that the word "Yami" means dark/darkness rather than black which I'm sure is "Kuro." Either way though it works, perhaps a bit more so with how the character is and her relatives.

You didn't do it here, but at times I have noticed that you sometimes type Sakon rather than Ukon, there are also some other easily missed typos, but like I said, they are easily missed.

Well keep up the good work, I'll be reading.

Ability King KK chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
Even though I've never heard of "Ayatsuri Sakon", this made me laugh. You just have to feel sorry for Atsuo.

Jinta just loves to cause trouble doesn't he?
chiharuSAICHI chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
Wow. Very unexpected crossover. But hey! Who knows maybe that happen to Urahara's shop a lot. Anyway, nice story!
Evilhumour Author chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
a little confusing in the middle. and i hate the aunt, in the good character way.