Reviews for He Lay There
Clamanter chapter 1 . 1/9/2013
Awesome, just awesome.
ThomE.Gemcity-06 chapter 1 . 8/30/2010
Holy Molly!

Poor Tim; being the last one killed.
bat-with-butterfly-wings chapter 1 . 3/28/2010
that was AMAZING! It was sad and truthful and gritty and so very elegant. If one goes down, they all go down. Thank you for writing this piece it was really a joy to read.


HalfwayThereNow chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
alice in a coma chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
Is it sad that this makes me happy? Of course, only in an "oh-my-god-that-was-absolutely-amazing" kind of way. *Really* well written and a great plot idea. I'm not too into McGee fanfiction (love him, but I'm heavy in the Tiva), but this was absolutely fabulous and heartbreaking.

I love it. Keep writing!
starjems88 chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
Wow that was different... never read a fic like yours, it was good just sad...
Jean89 chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
I like this, the story etc though I'm extremly glad this is not what really happened!

I like each characters deaths; Ziva hoping, Gibbs shot like Kate - very well written :)

At the end all I could think though was Abby! How would she go on?
ljtibbs3 chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
Wow. This was pretty amazing. I love your writing technique and this was such a different, chilling ending. I really loved it. I actually was listening to 'What If' by Safetysuit at the same time and it fit pretty well lol.
diana teo chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
Dark AU? More like pitch black! Yes,there were so many things that could have gone wrong,weren't there? This story,of course,was the worst case scenario,and it was a shuddering ,I think...
amdelodder chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
Dark is not the word for this. Eerie.