Reviews for Broken Record
Konoha's White Fang chapter 1 . 2/12/2010
To say the truth, reading the last line made me really sad. But I'm not here to talk about my emotions...it was a very expressing piece, a sad one might I add. I was able to imagine the short conversation the two had, mostly Ryoutarou's part. He seemed to be genuinly depressed, frustrated, sad and so much more. Nice style of writing. You have some skill to be a bright writer in the future.

KWF
hitsugaya07 chapter 1 . 12/15/2009
this fic really makes me cry...

reading this while listening to BRIGHT's So Long, Too Late added to the hurt...

I hope you could write more RyoutaroxKahoko fic...

I really love the pairing!
tuNGaw-GiRL chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
ariadne-chan! nande? nande? nande? this is so sad...

poor tsuchiura...then again, great work!_ as i always expect from you. you never fail to amaze me with your stories._ keep up the good work, ok? and im still looking forward for the hitoshii kawase updates!_ ariadne-chan, BANZAI!_
Annaliesmarie99 chapter 1 . 11/28/2009
Something sanely I have read here after the crap that's piling up here,in the archive, day by day. Then again, it's you, it's supposed to be gratifying to the senses! :D

This is really nice. The flow goes so well..even though she is with Tsukimori, Tsuchuira's emotions-aptly projected. Somehow, I can never for the life of me decide who I want for Hino, Len or Ryou.

Enjoyed every moment reading this. Good work.

Hope you are doing well, dearie.. :)
Caliphae chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
Omg, poor Ryoutarou! He would be perfect for Kaho...if Len wasn't in the way. Poor, poor dude. But you really have such a way of making the reader feel his pain, Angel! As always, I love your writing style, it blows my mind.

Hope to see you write that series soon!
ThatGirl96 chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
So good. I like the title, and I feel really bad for tsuchiara here!
karinarios chapter 1 . 11/21/2009
ariadne-san,

i hope i don't sound like some loser-slash-stalker but may i just say that I really think you're an ass-kicking writer? i often read one-shots [because they're short] but it's rare for me to find something as moving, painful, yet oddly 'kilig' as this Broken Record you've written. Please, please, please write more! ::D You inspire me, and I'm sure a lot of other struggling fanficers feel the same way, too.

Looking forward to the next uploads! Gambatte!
J. Panda chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
I have always been a strong LenXKaho fan but readign this seriously made me think otherwise...!

Great job! And good luck with this competition too!
maripas chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
is it just a one shot?
botania chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
okay, i shouldn't be cry!*tears* poor Ryoutaro :'( one word: cool!
Lingeron chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
Crap, I thought I was going to cry back there. :(

Man, you got me and it's like... 11:11. (I wished !)

Poor Tsuchiura-kun. :(

I'm sorry for this is my shortest review, sorry to disappoint you but I'm just so sleepy. This was the last thing i am about to do before i sleep... well before i brush my teeth and all. hehehe.

night angel ! take care.
PrayerSenshi chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
dang poor ryou. short end of the stick again, huh buddy?