Reviews for When the Stars Come Home
tempusborealis chapter 1 . 2/8/2010
I simply love your style of writing. If I were much of a writer, this is what I would want my work to read like. The images you weave are just beautiful and so believable. You don't make these two ardent young lovers because they're not. The fell in love over a decade and they have an easy, warm love. You are just fabulous.
sg-1fanintn chapter 1 . 1/31/2010 always.
Danae Dixon chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
That was just so beautiful, I didn't want it to end. Such lovely, lyrical prose; emotions evoked so skilfully, articulated so elegantly. Wonderful concise and in-character dialogue, also. I completely love this!
JenniferJF chapter 1 . 12/3/2009
Absolutely lovely. Thank you for writing and sharing. - Jenn
LY00 chapter 1 . 11/27/2009
Sigh. Lovely, just lovely. An excellent vignette of that first night at the cabin. I'm quite certain that it happened just like that. Thanks for writing.
lindseyjo chapter 1 . 11/23/2009
Huzzah! Well done, well spun, and well spoken!
nellstar65 chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
I adore Sam and Jack here-we-are-now this is our-moment-of-truth it's now-or-never and they consummate their love. I like your version. Just enough tension before Sam breaks the ice and I like her thoughts as Jack tenderly yet passionately makes love to her. Hey, your words and my imagination are priceless.
spacegypsy1 chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
Beautifully sweat as always, I so love your Jack and Sam, Becca
dp chapter 1 . 11/21/2009
Excellent and so very sweet.
leiasky chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
Oh, this was beautiful with just the right descriptive words to paint a perfectly believable picture of their lives. Well done!
SammieAtHome chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
Loved it. It definitely gave a familiar feeling to their actions. Like intimacy was there even tough never complitely accomplished till the end.
steadfast chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
Really great. Thanks.
Mandarax chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
That was so sweet. So well written. Thanks for sharing.