Reviews for Vast Differences the forth in the Unselfish series
Solivagant chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
There's nothing I can say except that that was adorable:)

Miranda
gilmoreluver06 chapter 1 . 3/19/2010
haha yes finally one where she gets hormonal and wow he stayed strong and didnt pass out like alot of guys do when thier kids are born.

''I don't know if it's hormones or what it is… I've been way emotional lately"

YES! Surprised she didn't yell like this is all ur fault you knocked me up with this child and are making me go through all this pain get out!
Trevor the Enchanter chapter 1 . 1/31/2010
Yeah, Monk always worries things to death. Course, so do I, so I have little room to talk. You've done a good job in keeping them in character. Makes me wonder what would have happened had Trudy lived.

However, you may want to spread out the lines more, so it's easier to read. I caught a couple grammar mistakes as well.

It's a bit too sappy for me, but that's just my preferences. It's no reflection on your writing. Hope you aren't offended
Black-Dranzer-1119 chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
Very cute. Well done. This is the sorta thing I wish happened in canon.