Reviews for Diaphaneity
kydora chapter 1 . 2/21
Beautiful short story, loved every bits of it. Thank you 3
xSereneMeadowsx chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
I know this is a couple of years old, but I just had to comment. This is all so beautifully written! You have a unique writing style!
Dirtberry chapter 1 . 10/11/2010
Ohmygod. I am ecastic you wrote this fic. I haven't been in the Clerith fandom for literal amount of years because I've been away for so long, but this fic - despite coming in just simple, short sentences - ironically told a fairytale so bittersweet and endearing, I think my heart just got swarmed in tears.

Words fail me and I cannot start in expressing how awwww-worthy this fic stands on its own. Your writing is incredible - the fact that you can tell so much in 50 sentences says more than anything else. don't stop writing Clerith - you do magic with this couple, and I can't wait to see myself returning back into this fandom with another fic by yours.

:) cheers!
sunflowerb chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
I am allowed to become a Clerith fan if I've never played FF7, because you're definetely beginning to turn me into one.

First off, your usage of parentheses is an art form. And you use some of the most unique and beautiful descriptions.

09. Made me giggle.

10. Made me actually, "Awwww" out loud. It's brilliant and beautiful and agonizingly sweet.

12. That one word and a title...that, my friend, is not writing, that is not literature, that is not poetry. That is flippin' ART. And my jaw is in the basement.

20. Your twist on "a picture is worth a thousand words" is so...I'm speechless. I honestly don't know how to say how that is.

. Just...wow. And I love your emphasis on "(such finality in that tiny snick of the closing lock)". Turning such a would-be mundance thing into such an important point...

24 & 25. Two words come to mind: Genius and AWWWWW!

26. Such simple elegant explosion of meaning and I don't know what to say.

45. Beautiful

50. Were you William Wordsworth in a past life?

When I'm sitting here gaping like a fish trying to figure out how to tell you how great this all is, you can be assured you've done a good job. (Hah, understatement of the century.)
Imashitowareto chapter 1 . 3/20/2010
haha!sure i will like it!coz i love this pairing a lot!looking up to your next story about them!
Riffs chapter 1 . 3/11/2010
Much better than the last I read. Poignant and great. I'm normally not one for "_ sentences," but this was really touching. It was beautiful and truly made me feel. Bittersweet when it needs to be and full of the sheer magic that is the CloudxAerith love.
SecretBox chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
Aww.

Jeez, these were all so beautiful, gorgeous and KH-like. D

Srsly, I adore them all! I love how some are ambiguous, and some are particularly fluffy, or melancholy, yet all put so much insight into the characters. & wow the description, it was magnificent.

VIVA LA CLOUD/AERITH!

[faves]

- sambox
Alantie Mistaniu chapter 1 . 12/1/2009
I truly enjoyed these. Clerith is wonderful, and you captured the essence of the pairing well. : D Fantastic work!
Unforgettable Green Eyes chapter 1 . 11/21/2009
Wow. Just wow.

Simply breathtaking.

Who knew one could say so much with so few words? You’ve taken a lot of the things I’ve always felt are so beautiful about these two and managed to fit them into 50 short sentences. One sentence makes you teary-eyed, the next makes you giggle, the one still after that sobers you right back up again… Their love for each other shines through so clearly in every word.

Yes, you make me wish for something longer and more in-depth for each of these words but that’s more of a testament to your wonderful writing skills than anything else. However, if you should decide to choose to flesh out any of these into a fuller, more comprehensive story, I won’t complain. )

Thank you for bringing back to this lovely pair the emotional aspect of their relationship that I’ve been looking for and missed dearly in recent fanfic.
jenyflo5483 chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
I loved this so much. I almost wanted to cry to the really beautiful, heartbreaking words I was reading. I absolutely LOVED all 50 sentences. You have a wonderful talent. 3

Awesome job, once again.

-Jeny