|Reviews for Briefcase Full of Guts|
| Reno254 chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
Loved it! Write more!
| unwittingcatalyst chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
Nice!-and in character: you've got the crass and the poignant sides of Ash, and an interesting hint that his preoccupation with the pretty women who enter the store is an attempt to escape the old bad memories.
The story is also truly creepy. This is maybe my favorite paragraph in the whole thing:
"That night he had the DREAM again, the dream so bad it had its own zip code in his mind. He fell among monstrous beings and reaching hands, screaming Linda's name and hurting for her all over again. His hand throbbed and a guttural voice reached his ears, speaking dark things in a language that seemed specifically built to howl and grind madness into words."
| Christy3k chapter 1 . 11/21/2009
This is classic! I just love it, and Ash was dead on (no pun intended)
"Cleanup on aisle three." ROTFLMAO