Reviews for Oh
ThorinKiliandFili4ever chapter 1 . 10/10/2010
A great story. Very well written.
Romanae chapter 1 . 11/21/2009
That was really good - I cant wait to read more written by you ]
PenonPaperFingersonKeys chapter 1 . 11/21/2009
Very good and very well written. Flowed nicely and had an appeal to it , so I wanted to continue reading it. You portrayed Leah quite nicely and showed her hardness and pain well and clearly.

Favorite Line:

It forced my baby brother into manhood.

I liked this line because you showed how Seth was forced into manhood and how Leah felt over it and also a bit of her protectiveness. Lovely for a drabble.

I hope this feedback is appreciated.