|Reviews for Oh|
| CarsonandMrs.Hughes4ever chapter 1 . 10/10/2010
A great story. Very well written.
| Romanae chapter 1 . 11/21/2009
That was really good - I cant wait to read more written by you ]
| PenonPaperFingersonKeys chapter 1 . 11/21/2009
Very good and very well written. Flowed nicely and had an appeal to it , so I wanted to continue reading it. You portrayed Leah quite nicely and showed her hardness and pain well and clearly.
It forced my baby brother into manhood.
I liked this line because you showed how Seth was forced into manhood and how Leah felt over it and also a bit of her protectiveness. Lovely for a drabble.
I hope this feedback is appreciated.