|Reviews for Letter To The Manufacturer|
| justadashofsarcasm chapter 6 . 6/9
Short and sweet. Great, I would have loved a little bit more from Pike but that is very in character, not mincing his words and somehow coming across amused but stern in two words? I love it so much :D
| justadashofsarcasm chapter 5 . 6/9
Omg this made me laugh so much. Love this, especially the p.s. at the end - brilliant! :D
| Guest chapter 6 . 5/17
Very funny xD
| Afroz chapter 6 . 6/11/2014
seriously, it was damn hilarious! especially jim's letters! :)
| Crazy Dyslexic Nerd chapter 6 . 5/30/2014
This is hilarious and a little bit frightening since companies do this kind of stuff, and people have died because of it. It is very well written, both comedic in its seriousness and very true.
| marmota-b chapter 4 . 5/19/2014
"we hope that our products are the last you will ever use" Oh dear! Oh dear oh dear oh dear... I'm in a school library. Why do I always stumble on stories like this while everyone else is sleeping, or while sitting in the school library?
| marmota-b chapter 3 . 5/19/2014
A suspicion is forming. I've read something like this before. With hotel soaps.
It's still hillarious.
| marmota-b chapter 1 . 5/19/2014
I love the business tone of this... with the occasional slightly more personal slip-ups. "It would be greatly appreciated if compensation for damage inflicted to both man and machine was received" is priceless. :D
| owtena chapter 6 . 5/2/2014
"that's the stuff the Enterprise is made of!"
I almost fell off my chair laughing :DDD This is definitely one of my favourite stories ;)
| PhantomBowtie chapter 6 . 4/26/2014
This is glorious!
| quaff chapter 4 . 12/21/2013
These "letters" remind me of a a series of "letters" written by Chris Anvil in the early 60s. They were very good and these are very good. I don't think I've read any as good as your series. Ta.
| quaff chapter 1 . 12/21/2013
This was fun to read as well. Ta.
| Azul Ocean chapter 6 . 10/31/2013
Awesome job. I could hear this in Kirk's voice. It sounds like something he'd write. Great job!
| victoria chapter 6 . 10/21/2013
I love it I have never laughed so much in my life brilliant thoght out and written. I would gladly read again and any other works you have thanks for making my day.
| SapphireSecret chapter 6 . 9/2/2013
This is awesome! I could see this happening. Good job.