|Reviews for Artemis Fowl: The Desiderata|
| alexzwhite2317 chapter 2 . 10/6/2020
I would like to point out that Holly already was claustrophobic.
| Wolfcape chapter 8 . 8/21/2020
I love mystery stories, but there's a few too many characters and no clues that actually deserved a dramatic reveal, though it definitely was dramatic!
Characters and humor is definitely on-point, and given the quality of writing, you can't imagine how disappointed I am that I cannot find where Lli moved to, seeing as they aren't on FanFiction anymore.
| whitealmond chapter 8 . 5/6/2015
I couldn't stop smiling this entire chapter. And I just realized - Conan Doyle? Watson? HA! XD sad that it took me so long, though...
Don't worry Holly, if Artemis is the brains, you're the brawn and the beauty ;)
| whitealmond chapter 4 . 5/6/2015
Well, that's convenient. I hope one of them has a recording device XD
| whitealmond chapter 3 . 5/6/2015
Even when Artemis doesn't remember Holly, they're connected. In this case, by a stolen necklace ;) now I know you said there wouldn't be any romance in this story, but they're both adorable nonetheless. I see this story has a few sequels, and I hope there's romance in them... XD
| whitealmond chapter 2 . 5/6/2015
No Opals at all, huh? That's kind of a relief XD so the opal necklace wasn't a bit of clever foreshadowing? XD
| whitealmond chapter 1 . 5/6/2015
Two opals in gold? Uh-oh.
Hilarious last part. Man, you've really got Colfer's voice down.
| Sana Lama Samaha chapter 8 . 3/1/2015
I finally got around to reading this after so long. This was an excellent mystery. (I feel kind of bad for Lili though. She was just a tool of her aunt's plot.) I like how so much of the mystery is revealed by Artemis and Holly hiding and eavesdropping on other people's conversations.
And Mulch, that dwarf is made of pure gold. I never get tired of his antics.
| Guest chapter 8 . 1/31/2015
There's no romance! Yay! I hate a tone of romance-ugh
| butterleaf chapter 8 . 12/25/2014
Awesome. I've gotten really into mythology recently, especially Aztec. (I've seen the summary for the second sequel and have high hopes) I'd better crack on and read part two!
| Guest chapter 3 . 11/5/2014
Yay no romance, everything has H/A it's so annoying!
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/5/2014
OPALS! I'm guessing 0pal is behind that...
| SecretSuccubus chapter 8 . 3/13/2014
You're doing well with the mystery detective aspect of this fanfic. I really had no idea what was going on until the last chap where all the explanation was placed. I guessed Loki was all behind it from the name Loki alone. God of Chaos and all.
I'm also glad that there was not much romance in this. I like Holly and Artemis being friends and teasing each other. I understand this fanfic was rushed so there weren't more details about each character and there were very many original characters which I have a hard time remembering which confused me, especially when they all talk together LOL.
| Shriannan chapter 4 . 7/11/2013
Loved the reference to switching eyes. :) I like that you brought in Lili Frond. What a fun twist I'm looking forward to seeing what will happen next and where the other parts of the necklace will turn up. Thank you for writing!
| Shriannan chapter 3 . 7/10/2013
This chapter made me laugh out loud several times. :) You do so well with the dialogue. I know I say this a lot, but you really do keep the characters *in character* which is a real talent. Can't wait to keep reading! Thank you for writing!