I would like to point out that Holly already was claustrophobic.

I love mystery stories, but there's a few too many characters and no clues that actually deserved a dramatic reveal, though it definitely was dramatic!

Characters and humor is definitely on-point, and given the quality of writing, you can't imagine how disappointed I am that I cannot find where Lli moved to, seeing as they aren't on FanFiction anymore.

I couldn't stop smiling this entire chapter. And I just realized - Conan Doyle? Watson? HA! XD sad that it took me so long, though...
Don't worry Holly, if Artemis is the brains, you're the brawn and the beauty ;)

Well, that's convenient. I hope one of them has a recording device XD

Even when Artemis doesn't remember Holly, they're connected. In this case, by a stolen necklace ;) now I know you said there wouldn't be any romance in this story, but they're both adorable nonetheless. I see this story has a few sequels, and I hope there's romance in them... XD

No Opals at all, huh? That's kind of a relief XD so the opal necklace wasn't a bit of clever foreshadowing? XD

Two opals in gold? Uh-oh.

Hilarious last part. Man, you've really got Colfer's voice down.

I finally got around to reading this after so long. This was an excellent mystery. (I feel kind of bad for Lili though. She was just a tool of her aunt's plot.) I like how so much of the mystery is revealed by Artemis and Holly hiding and eavesdropping on other people's conversations.

And Mulch, that dwarf is made of pure gold. I never get tired of his antics.

There's no romance! Yay! I hate a tone of romance-ugh

Awesome. I've gotten really into mythology recently, especially Aztec. (I've seen the summary for the second sequel and have high hopes) I'd better crack on and read part two!

Yay no romance, everything has H/A it's so annoying!

OPALS! I'm guessing 0pal is behind that...

You're doing well with the mystery detective aspect of this fanfic. I really had no idea what was going on until the last chap where all the explanation was placed. I guessed Loki was all behind it from the name Loki alone. God of Chaos and all.

I'm also glad that there was not much romance in this. I like Holly and Artemis being friends and teasing each other. I understand this fanfic was rushed so there weren't more details about each character and there were very many original characters which I have a hard time remembering which confused me, especially when they all talk together LOL.

Loved the reference to switching eyes. :) I like that you brought in Lili Frond. What a fun twist I'm looking forward to seeing what will happen next and where the other parts of the necklace will turn up. Thank you for writing!

This chapter made me laugh out loud several times. :) You do so well with the dialogue. I know I say this a lot, but you really do keep the characters *in character* which is a real talent. Can't wait to keep reading! Thank you for writing!