|Reviews for My Love Story Shouldn't End Like This|
| Serenity Takaishi chapter 1 . 7/3/2010
Talk about a let down O-o
I think i liked this. Baha. But i'm looking forward to part two :D Lol. It was sad, but not as emotional as i'm used to nice job
| Jaden Starr chapter 1 . 12/4/2009
| Courage Sun chapter 1 . 11/21/2009
Hiya! This story so far is okay, but one thing I really couldn't get passed while reading it was that you kept going back and forth between past and present tense.
"I opened the door and I can’t..."
If you want to get more people interested and more people to love this story then you really have to pay attention to that sort of thing _. Nice job though.