Reviews for Lotus Fervor
Anabely chapter 11 . 2/20/2013
Normally a story with a whole other myth inside it would drive me bonkers but I really like this.
Regin chapter 11 . 7/25/2012
I Like, I Lust, I Love!Please Update Soon!
wendy1969 chapter 11 . 5/23/2011
i have been reading through this storyand was so caught up in it, i forgot to review.

my son, annoying as he can be, asked what the review button was for. so i clicked it. so if you could prety please update this story. i so hope she doesnt get back with edwierdo
T1nk3rB1tch chapter 11 . 11/15/2010
wow that was a lot to take in in one chapter! i can't wait to see what dear old Carlisle has to say.
TwilightAsyra chapter 11 . 11/4/2010
First, I’m going to apologise for not reviewing every chapter. I just discovered your story and I can’t really review each and every chapter. If I feel like it, I may do it from now on, but I can’t guarantee it.

Next, I want to explain how I found your story. I’m a really big fan of Bella and Jasper together, lately and found your story on a favourites list of another writer. I wasn’t immediately convinced if I was going to like your story but after visiting your website for this fanfic I was hooked! I really have to congratulate you for making such a beautiful, professionally looking website.

I also adore your take on the faeries. I have mixed feelings on the ‘introducing a new species’ thing because some writers can’t pull it off. You convinced me, right from the start, that I would not be disappointed.

You have your mythology completely figured out in a way that makes perfect sense, but I do have a couple of questions. Can faeries only change one person? Because you implied in the first chapter it’s a one-time thing. Why don’t the faeries show themselves more? And are there vampires (or other mythical creatures) that know of their existence?

I also like your character, Grace. I only have one question. Is she so absent from Bella’s life because she has no idea how to handle her, because she doesn’t care (with her being an unemotional being), or because Bella needs to figure everything out herself?

I’m also curious as to where you are going with this story. Is Bree going to have a big role? And will there be more Faeries introduced?

One negative point about your writing is that I feel there needs to be a little more emotion and interaction between the characters. But that could just be because the story is just getting started. Or at this point, it could just be me.

I’m really looking forward to your next chapter and really want to see where you are going with this. Can’t wait for the conversation with the Cullens that will take place next chapter.

Thank you very much for writing and sharing this story.

WantJasperspeen chapter 11 . 11/4/2010
JXB Addicted chapter 11 . 11/4/2010
OMG! Rose thought Bella was dead and didn't tell Edward? Is Jasper still full vampire? Is he have any weaknesses now? Will Jasper and Bella fall in love? I know they have a bond now but its not love! Where are the wolves? Can't Bella go to sleep and find them? TTFN! JXB. ;0)
JXB Addicted chapter 4 . 11/3/2010
I think it is sweet that Bella want to share with Jasper! TTFN! JXB. ;0)
JXB Addicted chapter 3 . 11/3/2010
She knew what was going to happen! Why did she open the present? Did she do it to get rid of Edward? TTFN! JXB. ;0)
gimpy810 chapter 11 . 11/3/2010
Great chapter! Real life sucks lol. I'm still with you though, can't wait to see how this turns out but I will :)
TheOneMama chapter 11 . 11/3/2010
Good chapter. Jasper is awake, yay. Poor guy is cofused, hope he doesn't stay scared of Bella. Uh oh, cullens are back in. Update soon as you can.
gimpy810 chapter 10 . 10/18/2010
Loved this chapter. I can't wait to see how what Bella did for Jasper plays out. Great job!
ktdid23 chapter 10 . 10/18/2010
I just found your story and I am loving it so far! It's a really interesting idea! Can't wait to read more! :)
TheOneMama chapter 10 . 10/17/2010
I loved it, great chapter. Cant wait for more, but wont be to upset if there is not one soon. But please.
gimpy810 chapter 9 . 10/16/2010
This is an awesome story! I love the relationship you've created between Bella and Jasper. And it's kind of cool that she is something other than a vamp. Can't wait to read more!

P.S. I read the Bree story while it was still free on-line. It was, meh, alright, but it wasn't great. I wouldn't have paid $14.95 for it. SM seemed to have gone down-hill with Breaking Dawn.
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