So Anakin is basically a third wheel? Lucky him what a unbelievable story.

What if I'm crying so hard I can't breathe? :')

Force Suppressing Cuff Bracelet— excellent!

#Happy to have Bail and R2 back!
Padme’ is back to kick Vader- Anakin
Metal Encased sith ass-

-Keep Breathing-chapter 6 -7
! Well Donereally like the character of Jinn K- author has embarked upon a Oc-AU story of ObiDala and knowing it’s not her choice of pairing she has done very well! Wonderful use of words and growing the characters personalities develop true to their own stories! Pays great attention to details from dust, dark circles, blaster clothing, mind probes look out etca very good read one!

#STELLAR-CHAPTER*very -good -indeed!Good-Balance ! 5

—What a pleasant surprise to find this wonderfully well written storyI -Appreciate the mentioning of the younglings ages -re: time…,
bringing obi and padme’s “togetherthrough their emotional connection was perfect and keeping with the essence of the charactersWell written and thoughtful!’
Jinn KenobiObiDala is so neededand realistic
As I have said and believe No Way
Padme would not have fought back to survive and live for the sake of childrenregardless of having her heart shattered—-and
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—What a pleasant surprise to find this wonderfully well written story -I~Appreciate the mentioning of the younglings ages -re: time…,
bringing obi and padme’s “together-through- their -emotional -connection was perfect and keeping with the essence of the characters… Well~written and thoughtful!’
Jinn Kenobiso ‘realistic-sweetstrong-KenobiFamily ~
As I have said and believe No Way
Padme would not have fought back!to survive and live for the sake of children-regardless of having her heart shattered—-and Obi Wan wouldn’t have just become a desert recluse-that isn’t the true JEDI way …Anakin “chose” to follow the manipulative evil dark sidehe’s accountable for his actions ..,and redeemable… after his “pain& sufferingAnd you received a good review from-bespin -clouds….

I loved this. the relationship /t Obi-Wan and padme was well written and the tension with Vader well thought put. great job!

how hve I not found this fic before!? I LOVE IT ALREADY AHH

Rubbish poor Anakin he should have been with someone else.

This..is...the GREATEST OBIDALA FANFIC I'VE EVER READ!, WOW!, ANAKIN'S REDEMPTION WAS EPIC!

Oh give me a break Anakin turned back to the light for what? a family that cared nothing for him? A family that didn't want anything to do with him? Then there is Padme she still loves anakin but she is willing to love the man that was once anakin's best friend doesn't seem to me like something a person would do if they still loved someone. I know it happens. And anakin lucky guy that he is for to be married to her for three years during a war so didn't get to spend much time with padme. Obi-wan spent a lot more time with obi-wan got to rise his children. And he still cares enough to risk his life? After all that time in the dark side? Sorry I don't personally find it believable.

I did not enjoy this story. I admit I am not a fan of obidala but I do like some fics. This one is not one of them The only thing that caught be by surprise was the ending but still not good in my opinion. If you like this story that is fine I am not trying to be harsh or anything.

this was so beautiful. the ending was amazing, it made my eyes water. thank you for this :)

loooooove it! Thank you so much!