Reviews for A New Life
Guest chapter 21 . 8/25
Good story line... Though you seem to be jumping all over the place... And there are lots of grammar mistakes don't get me wrong it's a good story and you have good pace in moving along but it gets very confusing and you are not giving enough information! Just a word of advice read through your chapters before you publish them and I mean if you do it ten times or fifteen times it doesn't hurt to double check it and maybe send it to a friend and have them check it out and read it they could tell you what needs to be edited you do have a good story and I may just be a grammar nazi but grammar and punctuation are key
HAWNY chapter 1 . 4/5/2015
CHARLIE IS OVER PROTECTIVE OF BELLA COME ON LIGHTEN UP
lily chapter 2 . 6/9/2014
Your really funny I'm imagining the last part aaahhh
Guest chapter 1 . 2/2/2014
It was really random and chopping and the conversation where weird to! And you shouldn't keep promises you don't make and that comment was harsh. I know it takes a lot to publish a story but some people where looking forward to a sequel. But I did like the story line
twlightbella chapter 31 . 11/5/2013
Edward and Bella are married and have twin daughters Rachel Sierra and Mia Emily and a son named brandon.
anonymous chapter 32 . 12/30/2010
this is deffinetly not one of the best stories on .net. it really didnt have any criteria that meets readers expectations. too much fluff.

:)-$-3
EdwardBellaRenesmeCullen chapter 15 . 12/27/2010
i thought this story it good but disappoint that they tell Angela that they are vampire that suck. damn it i hate story that they tell human that they are vampire. good luck with this story i can't continued read anymore.
mrscullen92 chapter 31 . 6/11/2010
I love the story so much its awsome i wish this could haven been the book for the sereis cuz u have a natural talent for writing
PBSunrise24 chapter 1 . 6/2/2010
i jus started yr story...i tink it KINDDA may hv n interestin storyline 2 it...but i lke i wilin 2 read it...
lexi chapter 31 . 1/16/2010
no. please dont make edward go gay and end up with MIKE! anyway that was great. im glad u wrote it. now u have one less review to worry about.
lexi chapter 3 . 1/16/2010
i cant help it im still laughing from chapter 2. im laughing so hard im crying!
lexi chapter 2 . 1/16/2010
OMG! that is the funniest thing i ever read its good no great so far
Andi 31 chapter 31 . 1/15/2010
this was a cute story I enjoyed it. oh and it was actually published on my daughters birthday 11-21
RB chapter 4 . 1/14/2010
I love your storyline but, in my opinion, you have your characters talking too stiffly. The don't sound like they are actually having a conversation.
Teenwolfvampirediariesfan2016 chapter 31 . 1/13/2010
Hey!

I absolutely loved this story.

Great job!
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