|Reviews for Thirty Seconds|
| kapslar chapter 1 . 10/22/2013
I like how this hints at Haruhi wanting them to get together.
| Acts of Tekla chapter 1 . 11/5/2010
This was an interesting structure. I'm not sure what you meant by the AN at the bottom - was this inspired by an AMV?
| 20kindsoftasty chapter 1 . 3/8/2010
Just wanna say that this is one cute fic' you got here. I thought it was rather romantic and sweet.
Not to criticize or nothin', but I got a few helpful comments for you. Please don't use parentheses so often, they get rather distracting. Also, your character descriptions were decent, but I would have like to have seen more emotional description.
Like I said, this isn't a critical comment it's just a helpful tip. I really liked the story and I wish you luck on further writing adventures.
I'll be reading you!