Reviews for Thirty Seconds
kapslar chapter 1 . 10/22/2013
I like how this hints at Haruhi wanting them to get together.
Acts of Tekla chapter 1 . 11/5/2010
This was an interesting structure. I'm not sure what you meant by the AN at the bottom - was this inspired by an AMV?
20kindsoftasty chapter 1 . 3/8/2010
Howdy,

Just wanna say that this is one cute fic' you got here. I thought it was rather romantic and sweet.

Not to criticize or nothin', but I got a few helpful comments for you. Please don't use parentheses so often, they get rather distracting. Also, your character descriptions were decent, but I would have like to have seen more emotional description.

Like I said, this isn't a critical comment it's just a helpful tip. I really liked the story and I wish you luck on further writing adventures.

I'll be reading you!

20kindsoftasty