Reviews for Spiraled Escalation Out of Control
onetreefan chapter 11 . 4/5/2010
very good update!
ChamberlinofMusic chapter 10 . 3/28/2010
Aw poor Puck and Rachel. I really feel for the two and hope things work on for them. Thanks for the update!
satomika chapter 10 . 3/25/2010
please update this one soon!
justareader18 chapter 5 . 3/16/2010
This story is so good so far! I just started reading the story and it is awesome. I would love to read up to the latest update, but sadly, I have to get in bed. But I plan on finishing it when I get home from work. Love Puckleberry and seriously love how you are writing this whole story!
adara13 chapter 10 . 3/8/2010
Great update!
metaphor chapter 10 . 3/7/2010
Thank you for taking time out of your busy schedule to keep writing this fic. It's one of my absolute favorite WIPs and I'm always so happy to see an update. I think one of your particular gifts is having an *excellent* handle on the characters' voices, and that continued to be on display in this chapter.

I loved how happy Rachel was early on in the chapter, and I thought it was precious that Puck was happy for her, too (even if he himself wasn't very pleased by that development. Heh.) And I really liked Puck's ruminations on Rachel's seeing right through him, in contrast with Santana.

I also loved how Puck made some attempt to navigate the waters of being a proper boyfriend. His plan to just keep walking past her locker was hilarious. I think this was my favorite part, though: 'then he noticed that she looked really upset. And then it was like, fuck, because he was noticing all that shit about her lately and it was really fucking uncool. Really. Especially since he totally didn't want to deal with it, but at the same time his mind was going, did some prick make her upset? Does some jackass need to eat my fist? and other random things like that.'

Karofsky freaked me out when he pushed Rachel, I must say, and his warning sounded ominous. I wonder if Rachel will rethink her plans to keep it to herself before anything else happens.

And given his doubts, I can't wait to see where Puck will go from here.

I think this chapter worked nicely. I'm very much looking forward to the next!
samandy11 chapter 10 . 3/2/2010
O it sounds like Karofsky was maybe trying to warn her of something else...? Hm...very good, I'm eagerly awaiting a new chapter!
AllisonSwan chapter 10 . 3/2/2010
loved it
weasleymadchen chapter 10 . 3/2/2010
Yeih! Update!

This is getting pretty intense... in a good way :P
SparkFrost chapter 10 . 3/2/2010
Aiee, Karofsky is getting really damn creepy. I cheered when Rachel kneed him in the crotch, and if he tries to pull that again I hope she does it again!
Literati Lover chapter 10 . 3/1/2010
Seriously, Karofsky is crazy! I wish Puck would have walked in and beat him up again, so bad that he wouldn't do it again. He's psychotic and a bit obsessive. Poor Rachel :(

anyway, great story! I love it! Please update soon :)
onepowerball chapter 10 . 3/1/2010
Awesome story! Love the way you're writing all the characters...hope Rachel goes kung-fu on Karofsky's ass :P haha I can't wait to read the next chapter, so please please please write fast for my sake :D otherwise I'll have to...you know...WORK when I'm at work! :D Thanks again, keep up the awesomeness!
deactivated1111 chapter 10 . 3/1/2010
another wonderful chapter!

"Your mother is a lovely person and I am very happy that we had the opportunity to discuss you in depth! " that line was so funny!
Goldstar20 chapter 10 . 2/28/2010
This is pretty awsome! And I'm so stoked for the next chapter! :) puckelberry FTW
darlingtrek chapter 10 . 2/28/2010
New update time3! This chapter was fantastic and I'd be lying if I said I don't love the thought of the domestic!puckleberry in the beginning. Awesome chapter and thanks so much for the update.
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