Reviews for Spiraled Escalation Out of Control |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i like this tons you really get into pucks head i think you portray him really well :) update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh! interesting start! :D cant wait to read the next chapter! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() good story |
![]() ![]() Wow I really liked the story. You really wrote the characters well and no one seemed OOC. The end was sweet and I'm glad he's taking care of her. Eagerley waiting more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A solid start and an enjoyable read. Update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVED Puck's internal dialogue. xD Can't wait to see where you take this (although you've got me a bit nervous with this talk of impending 'darkness'. Erh.) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am intrigued about where you are going to go with this. This was an excellent chapter. You captured Puck's inner voice while showing a sweeter side to him. Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really great start! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is amazing! You have Puck's voice DOWN! I really love your writing! I love the part about Puck noticing that when Rachel makes a joke she smiles like she is proud of herself for attempting to be normal because not only is that A LOT to notice and super cute but because Rachel would totally do this. Really great job and please update soon, I love it already! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great start - I'm enjoying the way you write Puck - can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() You got a pretty good handle Puck and Rachel’s voice. I’m looking forward to reading the rest. i don't mind dark fics but please don't have her sexually assaulted. that seem to be a trend I've notice and it just squicks me out |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like how you got Puck's voice just right. I don't know how dark you're planning to go with this but this is a great start. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked it. I thought it was cute. |