Reviews for Spiraled Escalation Out of Control
Msarielle chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
i like this tons you really get into pucks head i think you portray him really well :) update soon.
starksnstripes chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
oh! interesting start! :D cant wait to read the next chapter! :D
happyseaturtle chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
good story
Fay chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
Wow I really liked the story. You really wrote the characters well and no one seemed OOC. The end was sweet and I'm glad he's taking care of her.

Eagerley waiting more.
Crimson-Kiss17 chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
A solid start and an enjoyable read. Update soon.
babs08 chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
LOVED Puck's internal dialogue. xD Can't wait to see where you take this (although you've got me a bit nervous with this talk of impending 'darkness'. Erh.)
BittyAB18 chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
I am intrigued about where you are going to go with this. This was an excellent chapter. You captured Puck's inner voice while showing a sweeter side to him. Great job!
buddyfozzy chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
Really great start!
kristendotcom chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
This is amazing! You have Puck's voice DOWN! I really love your writing!

I love the part about Puck noticing that when Rachel makes a joke she smiles like she is proud of herself for attempting to be normal because not only is that A LOT to notice and super cute but because Rachel would totally do this.

Really great job and please update soon, I love it already!
This Is chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
Great start - I'm enjoying the way you write Puck - can't wait for more!
Lemon Wacky Hello chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
You got a pretty good handle Puck and Rachel’s voice. I’m looking forward to reading the rest. i don't mind dark fics but please don't have her sexually assaulted. that seem to be a trend I've notice and it just squicks me out
joker to the thief chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
I like how you got Puck's voice just right. I don't know how dark you're planning to go with this but this is a great start.
saradelovely chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
I liked it. I thought it was cute.
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