Reviews for Uncomfortable
LogladyJ chapter 18 . 2/5
this story is excellent and really compelling. The characters behave like real tren boys, tacirurn emotionally illiterate, aggressive when they feel vulnerable, you've captured that so believeably. I hope one day you add to this story, or start another, because I found your characters moving, hunan and loveable despite their deep flaws. Their emotional growth felt natural and it made me feel really invested in them. Thank you for sharing your writing talents
sailoralice chapter 18 . 1/31/2023
Thank you.
abcd03 chapter 1 . 8/16/2021
I hope you finish this story one day!
Mich Elle Tigers chapter 1 . 12/9/2020
God... Edward is an asshole
Nice one! Loved it
Guest chapter 18 . 10/14/2020
I really hop you continue this story
thebluestbird chapter 18 . 9/16/2018
is there any possibility that this story will be competed?
cbzoo chapter 18 . 6/26/2018
this sucks as I had not realized this was incomplete and the realize you have not updated in 3 years, you should have pulled it or marked in On HIATUS so others are not left hanging :(
cbzoo chapter 10 . 6/25/2018
Edward is an a-hole and Jasper has practically done the same to peter as Edward has done to him
Weave the Magic chapter 18 . 4/4/2018
This is one of my all time favorites even though it's incomplete. I've reread this story so many times and it doesn't grow old. Just one thing I hope that you can write for us. Please! Please! Please do a love scene for us. Let them finally go all the way, intense life-altering sex, to fulfill Jasper's fantasies and mine too. I'm sure at this point Edward's itching to do it too, he's just too yellow to admit it out loud.
bellawu chapter 18 . 12/5/2017
please continue this story
Wordyma chapter 18 . 11/5/2017
So good...maybe have to reread the whole thing again
TippyL chapter 18 . 7/23/2017
Just reread this today and wishing you'd update or finish this beautiful story. Thanks so much for writing it.
Weave the Magic chapter 18 . 7/23/2017
Haven't opened the fanfiction in awhile. And what a surprise! Hopefully, after not opening this in a few months (weeks?... days?), there'll be an update of this story again. I'm not much into Twilight anymore, but this old faves of mine, I hooe will eventually get finished or a lot further ahead. :)
Guest chapter 18 . 7/8/2017
Please UPDATE!
Guest chapter 18 . 5/15/2017
I keep coming back and re-reading this whole story, hope you continue.
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