Reviews for Uncomfortable
cbzoo chapter 18 . 6/26
this sucks as I had not realized this was incomplete and the realize you have not updated in 3 years, you should have pulled it or marked in On HIATUS so others are not left hanging :(
cbzoo chapter 10 . 6/25
Edward is an a-hole and Jasper has practically done the same to peter as Edward has done to him
Weave the Magic chapter 18 . 4/4
This is one of my all time favorites even though it's incomplete. I've reread this story so many times and it doesn't grow old. Just one thing I hope that you can write for us. Please! Please! Please do a love scene for us. Let them finally go all the way, intense life-altering sex, to fulfill Jasper's fantasies and mine too. I'm sure at this point Edward's itching to do it too, he's just too yellow to admit it out loud.
bellawu chapter 18 . 12/5/2017
please continue this story
Wordyma chapter 18 . 11/5/2017
So good...maybe have to reread the whole thing again
TippyL chapter 18 . 7/23/2017
Just reread this today and wishing you'd update or finish this beautiful story. Thanks so much for writing it.
Weave the Magic chapter 18 . 7/23/2017
Haven't opened the fanfiction in awhile. And what a surprise! Hopefully, after not opening this in a few months (weeks?... days?), there'll be an update of this story again. I'm not much into Twilight anymore, but this old faves of mine, I hooe will eventually get finished or a lot further ahead. :)
Guest chapter 18 . 7/8/2017
Please UPDATE!
Guest chapter 18 . 5/15/2017
I keep coming back and re-reading this whole story, hope you continue.
Guest chapter 18 . 4/26/2017
Can you make more chapters?
Cardamoms3 chapter 18 . 4/10/2017
Gorgeous story. I'm sad not to know what happens in the end, but so appreciative for what already did happen.
ohxmyxria chapter 18 . 4/9/2017
Crossing my fingers that there might be an update some day - and following too to stack the odds a bit, ;)

Wonderful protrayals of two young men struggling with the realities of facing their sexualities. Very compelling writing style - a great mix of dialogue and action. I think I have a new favorite story.
Guest chapter 18 . 4/8/2017
When i 1st started reading... i hated edward... but towards the end.. he is the most honest character... really hope u will continue this story... really hope jas n ed will have a happpy ending.
Lauren chapter 1 . 2/26/2017
Not gonna lie, completely devastated that I might not get to read the rest of this fic. Its come across my path many times and I've dismissed it as poorly written porn - though I admit that I hadn't even read any of it when this opinion was formed - and when I did read the first chapter I hated Edward and Jasper. I hate story's where boys cheat on their girlfriends with boys like its no biggie. But I got dragged in by your amazing writing skills, Rosalie, the pain your story made me feel when ed kept being horrible to heart broken jasper and I think the boys character really developed as the story progressed, they have become real to me and much loved and worried other. Also you truly are a amazing writer - much to good for fanfiction any way. Really hope you continue but if you don't I guess ill live lol.
chartwilightmom chapter 18 . 2/13/2017
well, glad to see that you have started again, and sorry to hear about the laptops and lack of mojo, but you still have it, these boys will talk to you again, just breathe and relax

keep it coming when you can, doesn't matter when, that is what alerts are for :)
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