|Reviews for Uncomfortable|
| Havalina chapter 17 . 4/17/2012
I wasn't going to fangirl all over this chapter because, well, I try to be erudite BUT OMG SO HAPPY YOU UPDATED YAY FOREVER. Truthfully, this is the ONE story that I drop everything to read when it updates. The ONE. Everything about this fic, from the first line you wrote so long ago, until the parting tease in this latest chapter is attention-grabbing. Your style holds you and doesn't let go, even with its sparse language and terse dialogue. Maybe that's why we want so much more. In so so many fics, there is way too much exposition; we slog through three chapters to find out the events of one evening. But with yours, we see the things that matter. A car ride where no one speaks a word. A never-sent text. A simple, "I liked it," weeks after the fact. Rosalie was right - it IS like pulling teeth getting these boys to communicate, but when they do, it's worth more.
And the tension, well. I'm sure your reviews have alerted you to the tension we all feel. And while others want them to get straight to the main event, I have to say, I am REALLY looking forward to Edward replacing the image Jasper has of him grabbing Bella's ass with grabbing HIS. Just that much, I know, will be very, very hot. The first brush of his finger against Jasper there ... OMG. I can't wait for you to write it better than I am imagining it.
This is such a great slash fic. The awkward, uncomfortable, come-to-grips with every revelation. A small kiss on the sidewalk is a huge issue, the sex is long-suffering. But the love is always there. *sigh* Never stop writing these boys.
| jesmtl chapter 17 . 4/17/2012
THank you for this. One of my favourite stories. You really capture their complicated relationship. It always leaves me wanting more.
| simba5waldo5 chapter 17 . 4/17/2012
Oh my god! I have so missed this story! This was great. Loved it. I would imagine that all this was hard for Edward. Really liked that Edward typed I miss you on his phone. And loved his closing comment. I hope u update again soon. This story is amazing. You are so talented. Can't wait to read what happens next. Great job. Melissa
| I'm Alec's Number 1 chapter 17 . 4/17/2012
HOLY SHIT! That last line got me!
Update, ASAP! it's been too long!
| pintsizedjellybean chapter 17 . 4/17/2012
this update was amazing can't wait for the next one!
I love their relationship you can see them growing and become more comfortable every chapter
plus they are super hot i so would not mind if i happened to see them kissing in port angeles! :)
| ebs45 chapter 17 . 4/17/2012
I just read it and I knew it would be great! I know I already reviewed but I just had to again. I was seriously cracking up by the end and then when Edward finally answered his question my mouth dropped. I had to pick it up from the floor. I LOVED IT!
Lots of love
| ebs45 chapter 16 . 4/17/2012
OH MY GOD I COMPLETELY LOVE YOU! I haven't even read the chapter yet and I know its going to be great. I cried tears of joy when I saw you updated it. I thought you were going to give it up. Thank you so much! Off to read the chapter! :D
Lots of love
| kasiii chapter 17 . 4/17/2012
Thank You for this story. Wish I could press next but no matter the wait, I'm here to stay. The best story out there. Worth the wait.
"I miss You" I think that said it all.
| Fliberty chapter 17 . 4/17/2012
Edward is such an intense and complex character. He can be frustrating but he's clearly struggling with many aspects of his relationship with Jasper. I hope they can work it all out.
Did Jasper's dad notice anything? I think he did.
| bbbluez chapter 17 . 4/17/2012
So thrilled to see this update! I just love this even though these boys can be a bit frustrating.
| TheInevitableKind chapter 17 . 4/17/2012
HOLY SHIIIITTTTTTT !
That was pure perfection and maybe even more. I felt like Edward was progressing his relationship with Jasper and that last sentence made me want to jump out of my chair. I will read a couple of chapters before this, over and over, so I can get into the flow of chapter 17.
BUT, still amazing. LOVE IT. Loveeee EDWARD! This was absolutely brilliant and adorable! I'm gonna read it AGAIN, in a while, and AGAIN and AGAIN.
Hopefully you can upload in a month or two! (:
| 35nanou chapter 17 . 4/17/2012
Jasper est touchant aussi bien quand il cherche à savoir ce que veut Edward de lui que quand il se rend compte qu'il a trop poussé ce dernier ou encore quand il se rend compte que compte que son père est là ou bien dans son état d'ébriété quand il dit à Edward qu'il ne pense qu'à le baiser.
Dans l'évolution de leur relation, Jasper a souvent une longueur d'avance mais Edward même s'il évolue à son rythme n'est dorénavant pas loin derrière Jasper et a les mêmes envies et pensées bien qu'il ne s'envisage qu'en tant que top dans cette relation ce qui lui correspond plutôt bien!
J'ai aimé ce chapitre du premier au dernier mot de part ce qui s'y passe et bien sûr la conception, les personnages et l'écriture!
Merci pour le partage et à bientôt.
| chocolatelovergirl chapter 17 . 4/17/2012
| emochick920 chapter 17 . 4/17/2012
Oh my I wasn't expecting that
| Binky chapter 17 . 4/17/2012
Hey Edward , I could've told Jasper that for free!