| Reviews for Uncomfortable |
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   twilightmom67 chapter 1 . 11/22/2009 Wow! You write a great Assward! Hope you decide to continue this because I'd love to see how it plays out. I'm sure Edward is really into Jasper...not sure if Edward knows he's gay (or bi) and he's just not ready to come out yet, or if he hasn't been honest with himself yet, but it's clear to all of us that he's into Jasper! I'd love to see Jasper with a happy ending...I felt bad for him, and also for Alice. I can only imagine how she'll feel if she finds out her boyfriend has the hots for her brother, and vice versa! Sounds like the making of a great story! |
| Beans827 chapter 1 . 11/22/2009 Oh man, that was interesting! WOW! Very good job. It was very worth the read. Good luck with the contest. Great concept. |
| gumibear26 chapter 1 . 11/22/2009 You write a really good a**hole Edward. Poor Jasper. |
| clairdeluneisgreat chapter 1 . 11/22/2009 *Gasps* wow that was harsh. I really hope you decide to continue this after the contest. I loved it! |
| TwistedforTwilight chapter 1 . 11/22/2009 Poor Jasper! I hope you plan on extending it. Good luck in the contest. |
| OnTheTurningAway chapter 1 . 11/22/2009 This was very well done...I really enjoyed the UST between J & E until that bit of citrusy goodness :) I hope you'll consider continuing this after the contest is over. Best of luck! |
| Trixiebell chapter 1 . 11/22/2009 OMG that was amazing ur such a gd writer and to do that just because you had a one line idea ARGH i wish i could do that. Please please please write a sequel something were Jazzy ends up on top because that is where he should be! i wanna kill edward for being so mean. and that was a lie right? he was totally into Jasper it was obvious from the way i read it, is that what you intended? and i especially loved the way you wrote the desciption of Edward the '...annoys me ...annoys me' part, i thought that was really gd babe this entire thing is screaming sequel so i'll be on the lookout trix x |
| LLeone1985 chapter 1 . 11/22/2009 I really enjoyed this. I hope your considering continuing, I'd like to see how this all turns out. |
| shslsadawkwardteen chapter 1 . 11/22/2009 please please please please please tell me there is more to this! like make a sequal or an update just DO SOMETHING PLEASE! this was amazing and it needs some continuation of some sort! |
| BeenBitten chapter 1 . 11/22/2009 Oh no..Jazz has to get some lovin' too! Poor baby. |
| TheGirlInThePinkScarf chapter 1 . 11/22/2009 Wow! This was absolutely amazing... I loved it, loved it. I would love to see you continue it... only if you want to though. |