Reviews for Uncomfortable |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Seeing this update makes me so happy I could cry. I really really really hope you're able to write more. I never could bring myself to take this off alerts, because I just hoped that maybe, one day, you'd come back to it. *mwah!* thank you! |
![]() ![]() I started reading this story years ago. It's one of my favorite fanfics ever. I hope you continue it, but I understand if you don't. Life gets in the way sometimes. Thanks for the update, no matter how small. |
![]() ![]() Great to see the chapter Good luck with whatever writing you do next - though more of this would be nice! |
![]() ![]() Omg it's been so long. The wait was worth it though this chapter was really good. If you decide to continue writing I will continue reading. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was so great to see (!). Yeah I've lost writing to faulty laptop AND got a nasty virus that deleted things from my back up drive when I thought I was performing back ups. It's painful and I swear I was grieving over my lost words. I hope you get your mojo back because this is such a great story that has it all - strong and complex characterization, sharp dialogue and all the great angst aka plot development. I also appreciate how intelligent this treats the topic of being young and gay in a small town. It really is head and shoulders above so many stories that fail to capture that inexplicable element - palatable chemistry between the characters. Thanks for giving us this second chance at such taut storytelling, however brief, it was glorious. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn! I wish the story didn't end there... this was so good. I hope some day you come back to finish it. They are so frustrating and I love them for it! Thanks for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man...I LOVE this story! |
![]() ![]() Please Please Please finish this story its to good, it deserves to be finished. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would really appreciate your updating this great story. I'm hanging to know the rest of their saga! Please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ive been avoiding this fic for so long, seeing how after all these years, it's pretty obvious you're never gonna finish this, which is too bloody bad coz it had the makings of something truly awesome... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Think about finishing this please |
![]() ![]() Are you ever going to update? Or just leave this story behind? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Have you abandoned this story? Because that would suuuuck. These boys are so angsty but I think they're starting to loosen up finally. Please continue it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Liked this chapter a lot. I think that if Jasper and Edward are together for the next fifty years, the swings-and-roundabouts anxiety and angst will have hardly changed and that's part of their charm. I've enjoyed your story so very much. I see that it's a long time since you've updated and the chances are that you won't finish the story after all this time. Be great if you did but it's ok if you don't. You've given me enough imagination fodder to last a lifetime. Thank you for your incredible story and may your muse find you again one day. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finally a chapter that's more happy than excruciatingly anxious, lol. I liked the way things went between Edward and Jasper's mother. I'm glad that there's just that little bit less stress in both of the boys lives. As always, incredibly realistic. Loved it. |