|Reviews for The Cure|
| Sarah chapter 9 . 10/20/2011
I've never cried reading a story before. Bravo.
| Crystal-Wolf-Guardain-967 chapter 32 . 9/27/2011
i loved it!
| Kohana Kurama chapter 32 . 9/15/2011
Firstly, let me say that you should write an original fiction story and submit it to a publisher. YOU. ARE. SO. AWESOME! This is the quality work you'd expect to find in a bookstore like Borders. Structure? Awesome. Plot? Perfect. I've bought books that had way more typos and grammatical errors than this. I am absolutely AMAZED at how well put together this is. For the love of all that is fanfic-no, for the love of all that defines WRITING-please, keep writing. Keep doing whatever it is that you do that results in this quality of fiction. If you have an editor, kiss them for me. If not, grab a mirror and kiss yourself. You deserve an award (I'll mail you one if you'd like) for this.
Secondly, I never considered myself a fangirl until I read chapter four. After I read that, I'm sure I've squealed, squeaked, whimpered, cried, and screamed close to 100 times something that was supposed to be "TEAM JACOB!" and I'm proud of that. Reading "The Cure" has made me a very proud (and very vocal) Jacob fangirl. Thank you.
Lastly, I live in Mesquite, Texas and attended Texas Woman's University in Denton. OMIGAWD! This. Is. Awesome. There is nothing cooler than reading something where the characters or setting is based on where you live. I LOVE Denae as if she were a sister or best friend I've known forever; it sucks royally that she is not a real person. I LOVE how well you painted the original characters and even gave them a kiss of life that wasn't there before (for me) that made them get up and walk. As an author, you are my favorite. Honestly. Anyone can write. Anyone can write something unique. But it takes SERIOUS and SUPERIOR talent to be able to take someone else's idea and characters, place them into a new story, and make it seem as if the original writer wrote that story, too. If I never looked at the title and author of this fic, I would have swore on my life SM wrote this. I'd ask why the emotion of her characters upped their ante a little but I would have thought it was her. I mean, it seems like a genuine Twilight saga installment but it's clear that there's a different brain powering this piece, if that makes any sense.
In short, as if you didn't know, I LOVED THIS STORY! WOOT! I originally intended to review every chapter and quote the parts I loved with my responses then thought better of it; spamming your inbox when you've written such a delight really isn't any way to reward you.
Please keep writing.
Please keep giving us insight to your imagination.
Do you have extra space in your closet? I'd love to set up camp there and wait for any updates for anything you write. I could live off of cookies and milk and even be your editor.
Thank you for sharing this magnificent piece of art (yes, ART) with the world. We appreciate, adore, and now love you.
| FindSarah chapter 32 . 6/13/2011
Whaaaaaaaat did you do! Saaaaad face!
| MintCcIceCream chapter 32 . 6/7/2011
Absolutely amazing story! I'm in love with Deane! She's possibly the best OC character I've ever read! I can't wait to go read the sequel! This story is just filled with so much emotion and detail and imagery and it's so well written. Everything a real story needs. I think you're a fantastic writer. Don't ever stop, because you have such a talent! Good luck writing and with life and everything! LOVE THE STORY!
| JustCallMeWhatever chapter 32 . 1/3/2011
I absolutely LOVE this story! It was freaking amazing!
You are a fantastic writer. Now, on to Sweet Sacrifice! hehe
| eve chapter 32 . 11/7/2010
Fantastic! I do like Nessie so I am not always fond of Jacob & OC stories, but this was brilliant. I thought the dialogue was very good, and I loved the way the plot was unravelled. I would have expected Bella to show some jealousy at the beginning, instead of becoming instant friends with Jacob's imprint. Still a great story though, I will make sure to look for the sequel.
| kaykayM chapter 32 . 8/22/2010
this is actually amazing... you should publish it as a book or something! :P
it kept me up all night reading, then re-reading cause i got too excited and accidentley missed bits out :L
it's so captivating and i didn't want it to end!
looking forward to the sequal :D i SHALL be bookmarking your page ;D
| LucyPenny chapter 32 . 8/9/2010
I thought I had reviewed this already, but apparently not!
I LOVED the ending! Love Jake & Denae, so sweet! This was an amazing story, & I loved every bit of it! You're a fantastic writer & I can't wait to see how the sequel goes. Thanks for writing this wonderful story!
| Yours-in-Eternity chapter 9 . 8/2/2010
. ! SOOOOOOOOOO SWEET!
| Shnitzel chapter 32 . 7/30/2010
Since you sent me a PM, I didn't know whether to review here or in a PM... so I just decided with this. :D
You tied up this story rather nicely. Good conclusion but it has enough lose ends to write about for the sequel. I like how it was written in Jacob's point of view. It gives us a chance to truly see his love for Denae. It's sweet. Their gifts for one another are very original as well. (Even if the git of jewelry is overplayed, it is kind of unavoidable, I suppose. -') I can't wait to read the sequel. I'm sure it will be as awesome as this one!
| madhatter47 chapter 32 . 7/30/2010
Ohh No! Poor Denae shes been through so much! Whats happening with her an Jake now? Post the new story soon, pleease :D
| EclipseLover97 chapter 32 . 7/28/2010
I really Loved reading The Cure you are a great writer I am so happy you are making a sequel I already see myself loving it I can't wait for the first chapter
| Latte Nights chapter 32 . 7/28/2010
OMG! I red the story in like two days and found it awesome. I like the way you created your OC, not at all ultra powerful or somethin' like that. And the invisible vampire, I thought it was Grant and it was Chase! Big big surprise there! But the best part was the teaser. I really wanna know what did happen.
Another thing, really good use of the imprint! I'll be waiting for the sequel.
| LPsDarkAngel chapter 32 . 7/27/2010