Reviews for Taking Initiative
darccarl chapter 1 . 12/27/2017
I love it! I don't think this is OOc at all! Their personalities are just the way I imagine.
okami-onna chapter 1 . 10/16/2014
Damm, that was hot!. Clearly you are right with them not going all the way just over a little girl talk but man, my perverted side was a little disappointed.
You need to write a steamy smut, please!. I really like your stories good smut.
I'd love to have an Ikuto of my own!
p-chan abductor chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
Guest chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
Nice story
annequinox chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
Wahaha, I liked the last sentence xD

Aww, Ikuto's so sweet. And he looks sexy when he's strained ;)

Lovely :D
echelon483 chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
This got to be one of the best amuto fic I've ever read! If you ever write something else of this pairing, I'll sure be reading it!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/23/2012
This is written so well... Hahahhah it was sooo good
Emi chan chapter 1 . 12/13/2011
That is really great. Awesome. Don't have a word to describe anymore cos it is just so freaking great. Amu was a bit OOC but I don't mind. Not one bit at all cos I love this very much. It is pretty long but it is worth reading. Well keep on with the work. I love you and your writing very much. Bye bye. Again I love your story.
Serena Scarlet chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
Ha, I liked how they "did it" without actually doing it. An interesting concept, and it makes sense for them to do that becuase it is in their characters(it really is hard to write a full blown lemon for Amu, huh?). Nicely done!

melany21 chapter 1 . 3/25/2011
I thought it was a great story, I really enjoyed reading it!

and you did a great job on keeping the characters the way they are !
happy bunny chapter 1 . 12/11/2010
i like it alot. the had hot ness with close it was good and showed u dint need to lose cloths to have an orgasom
Besu-nee-chan chapter 1 . 9/15/2010

The only thing you missed was spelling the 'british' way, but you could be British, so that doesn't really matter.

But WOW!


I love you for this story! I love it! I'm going to check out your profile and read your other story's!

Hee hee...3


P.S.: You should feel honored. Only EXTREMELY good authors make it on my Author list. x)
Sandstripe chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
Ya, know this is probably the only M rated Amuto story that I have read that has really captured just how much Ikuto CARES about Amu, yes most of them include the words 'i love you' exchanged between the two, but it seems more of a formality than actually meaning something, but in this one you really get a sense of just how much he cares for her, he's more than some perverted cat-boy that stalks her (tho that IS true lol). He really isn't going to do 'something that she'd actually hate' I get the sense that theres this whole second layer to him that we only get glimpses of in the anime, more so in the manga but still. He's in love with her, would do anything for her, and it's really nice to see that in a M rated story, because most of these stories are just random fucks, this one tho, you really get the sense that it MEANS something. To both of them.

Sorry for writing such a long review but I really love this story and the fact that it's so well written and COMPLETLY in character for both of them which is just about impossible to do... Needless to say fantastic job, I loved it.
Kpop Princess Mei chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
My face is stuck in perma-grin mode. xD I loved this piece. It was hilarious and kinky and sweet all in one. 3 Love your work.


dragonflyer30 chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
Haha i luv the kinkyness XD ! Lol
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