Reviews for Everyone has darkness
Guest chapter 49 . 9/5
Great story.
Guest chapter 4 . 8/29
Ok I'm not reading that.
There isn't even one character who is likable : Naruto is an arrogant bastard, Sakura is just annoying, Jiraya a useless pervert, Tsunade an angry drunk, Kurenai a slut who has no problem breaking her so called favourite student heart for a quick shag and the others are idiots.
Hell... I actually hope the Akatsuki is going to win, good riddance.
pyoson123 chapter 1 . 8/15
I read this story before but now that I'm reading it again it's dumb that you keep adding random shit every single chapter like wtf. First Naruto friends is alive and is angel and then after that theirs the fucking gods after that there's more dumb shit like him getting weak and getting went somewhere.
Sh1d0u chapter 1 . 8/5
Geez, the initial chapters of this story makes me cringe, but holy crap it gets so much better the longer it goes.
outta fucks to give chapter 47 . 8/4
wait , thats Hermes my guy
maxentirunos chapter 3 . 8/3
And i stop here. Your character was already pretentious before but here we see you are as well, naruto is just your self-insert of who you want to fuck in naruto universe. Between the introduction, the pick-up line and the sex scene, you write more like a virgin teen having seen to much porn and movies than someone experimented.

Nobody talk like that in real life, someone saying such pick-up line have two results, being rejected with a 'are you for real right now?' or used as drink buyer. Your Naruto is not as dark as he is only edgy, worse even that this emo of sasuke in canon in only three chapters.
Guest chapter 49 . 7/31
To go you again, Darth;-)

I've lost count at this point but I think that was my 14th time reading AND finishing this fic. Whenever I get bored of reading or finding fics, I jump back here and after finishing it I re-read WOTR again. Probably finished that over 10 times already.

I hope EHD-2's new chapters come out soon cause I'm anticipating for them crazily!

Peace to you:-) And thank you man really... For writing such a marvelous, legendary fic. Hats off!

Mr. Hide
outta fucks to give chapter 28 . 8/1
in reality the hulk would come back , he's got a healing factor u know.
Mr. Hide aka Hasuinna19 chapter 48 . 8/1
I reviewed it once again last night in chapter 49 but it didn't work. Maybe you can't review a chapter twice?

Anyway, lost count but its probably my 14th or 15th time finishing this fic. Whenever I get bored of reading something, I carry my ass all the way here, finish reading it from the beginning and start reading WOTR again. Ah! The one tonic I'm hopefully never gonna get bored at... HOPEFULLY;-)
outta fucks to give chapter 22 . 8/1
outta fucks to give chapter 19 . 7/31
LMAO "mom and dad style battle"
outta fucks to give chapter 10 . 7/30
HIGH KIDS do you like violence , you wanna see me 2 9inch nails through my eye lids?
Loveless chapter 40 . 7/18
The truth is your story is fun but it comes up with moments where it is boring and certainly not interested in your opinion we are only interested in history and now.

Second if it is true you made a real dark naruto when giving feelings if seriously you wanted true evil your Naruto would not have cared about anyone's death but you could not write it that loser the truth and that mamahuevovo you are.

And as for Sasuke he can be strong but his personality does not work is a totally useless character and you say that a really good target killed his brother but wait someone came and manipulated him to be bad but then change to time I'm good then bad favor is a character that lacks atodo unlike Naruto who is a character that has caracter to never leave their dreams or their ideals and something that the truth I see that you would not understand pefo haste then calf pussy dectu mother.
Guest chapter 49 . 6/14
Nice ending didnt see that coming
CSGOz3r0 chapter 1 . 6/16
Dude, this is hilarious! Beginning's kinda rough, but it definitely smoothes out later! Definitely recommending it!
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