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   pyoson123 chapter 1 . 8/15/2018 I read this story before but now that I'm reading it again it's dumb that you keep adding random shit every single chapter like wtf. First Naruto friends is alive and is angel and then after that theirs the fucking gods after that there's more dumb shit like him getting weak and getting went somewhere. |
| Ouroboros Maelstrom chapter 1 . 8/5/2018 Geez, the initial chapters of this story makes me cringe, but holy crap it gets so much better the longer it goes. |
| outta fucks to give chapter 47 . 8/4/2018 wait , thats Hermes my guy |
| maxentirunos chapter 3 . 8/3/2018 And i stop here. Your character was already pretentious before but here we see you are as well, naruto is just your self-insert of who you want to fuck in naruto universe. Between the introduction, the pick-up line and the sex scene, you write more like a virgin teen having seen to much porn and movies than someone experimented. Nobody talk like that in real life, someone saying such pick-up line have two results, being rejected with a 'are you for real right now?' or used as drink buyer. Your Naruto is not as dark as he is only edgy, worse even that this emo of sasuke in canon in only three chapters. |
| Guest chapter 49 . 7/31/2018 To go you again, Darth;-) I've lost count at this point but I think that was my 14th time reading AND finishing this fic. Whenever I get bored of reading or finding fics, I jump back here and after finishing it I re-read WOTR again. Probably finished that over 10 times already. I hope EHD-2's new chapters come out soon cause I'm anticipating for them crazily! Peace to you:-) And thank you man really... For writing such a marvelous, legendary fic. Hats off! Mr. Hide |
| outta fucks to give chapter 28 . 8/1/2018 in reality the hulk would come back , he's got a healing factor u know. |
| Mister Hide chapter 48 . 8/1/2018 I reviewed it once again last night in chapter 49 but it didn't work. Maybe you can't review a chapter twice? Anyway, lost count but its probably my 14th or 15th time finishing this fic. Whenever I get bored of reading something, I carry my ass all the way here, finish reading it from the beginning and start reading WOTR again. Ah! The one tonic I'm hopefully never gonna get bored at... HOPEFULLY;-) THANK YOU SO MUCH ONCE AGAIN FOR WRITING ONE OF THE MOST CRAZIEST STORIES EVER EXISTED IN FANFICTION! PEACE TO YOU:-) |
| outta fucks to give chapter 22 . 8/1/2018 YOU CANT SEE ME MY TIME IS NOW |
| outta fucks to give chapter 19 . 7/31/2018 LMAO "mom and dad style battle" |
| outta fucks to give chapter 10 . 7/30/2018 HIGH KIDS do you like violence , you wanna see me 2 9inch nails through my eye lids? |
| Loveless chapter 40 . 7/18/2018 The truth is your story is fun but it comes up with moments where it is boring and certainly not interested in your opinion we are only interested in history and now. Second if it is true you made a real dark naruto when giving feelings if seriously you wanted true evil your Naruto would not have cared about anyone's death but you could not write it that loser the truth and that mamahuevovo you are. And as for Sasuke he can be strong but his personality does not work is a totally useless character and you say that a really good target killed his brother but wait someone came and manipulated him to be bad but then change to time I'm good then bad favor is a character that lacks atodo unlike Naruto who is a character that has caracter to never leave their dreams or their ideals and something that the truth I see that you would not understand pefo haste then calf pussy dectu mother. |
| Guest chapter 49 . 6/14/2018 Nice ending didnt see that coming |
| Vermilion0 chapter 1 . 6/16/2018 Dude, this is hilarious! Beginning's kinda rough, but it definitely smoothes out later! Definitely recommending it! |
| Guest chapter 29 . 5/29/2018 I GOT A BIGASS HEADACHE AFTER READING HALF CHAPTER.. SHIT STORY |
| Hit1903 chapter 1 . 5/30/2018 it was a shit story |