i like this idea so far not a whole lotta dark but like all stories you can't expect it to cash out in the first chapter. . . .unless it's a really long a chapter but anyways i'd like to see how all of this works out seeing as he was able to stop a tsunade fist and knockout jiraiya i want know how and that'll only happen if i stay tuned and read the following chapters so. . .you got another reader. . .definitely

good fic