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![]() ![]() ![]() I think naruto needs to argue that the village either needs to "grow a brain" or "grow up".. Because ALL of the problems naruto has had with ANYONE has been VERY IMMATURE problems.. Like middle-school playground problems... They supposedly hate naruto for being jinchuriki.. But they ALL KNOW that there HAS to be a jinchuriki in the village and that it/he/she is SUPPOSED to be ungodly powerful... It's been that way SINCE THE FOUNDING OF THE VILLAGE.. There is NOTHING new here... With Hiashi..Getting mad at telling naruto not to be around his daughter.. HE'S NEVER been around her... Not one conversation.. (ok, maybe a short one right before the konoha crush, and maybe one when HE'S ON A MISSION with her).. How does one yell at someone to stay away from their daughter... When they BOTH work in the same military village and WILL probably be put on missions together? That's SO STUPID and it's CHILDISH... Extremely immature... Not how adults talk... Then he gets mad for naruto NOT being around hinata? Which is it? AGAIN, extremely CHILDISH. I don't think you are portraying these people as adults... They all act... Maybe 11? Maybe a little younger then that...As to what happened to naruto? Easy, he was AWAY FROM THE "BRAIN ROT" that seems to prevail in konoha and actually GREW UP. It's not really that difficult to understand.. The naruto from before must have had MASSIVE brain damage... And konoha seems HELL BENT on making it so it's people achieve a mental/emotional age of around 10 and then NEVER GROW anymore... But away from that... People change QUITE A BIT, in very short amounts of time.. (especially if they heal said brain damage)... You'd think Tsunade at least would act a like an adult (she's been away from konoha) but nope... Bi-Polar as hell AND childish somehow... (alcohol generated, early-onset dementia or something?.. It WILL eat your brains if you drink enough, long enough). |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well your ENTIRE argument against Hinata COULD be used for Kurenai too. He doesn't know her EITHER...She never talked to him AT ALL either (and she was old enough to KNOW BETTER).. Hinata knew QUITE A LOT about naruto from following him around, kurenai DOESN'T... To Kurenai in fact, he is just a "rando hookup"... Nothing more... I get naruto's position with getting with her (somewhat)... He needs a place to crash and some nooky... Kurenai satisfies both considerations, BUT OTHER then that.. Don't see it. Could have been Anko or Yugito or ANY NUMBER of chunin or jounin women...Heck, why didn't Tsunade figure this out?... Isn't she supposed to "care about" naurto? Seems kinda a GLARING omission here. I could KINDA understand getting with Shizune before Kurenai.. Simply because Shizune, has that "kind, caring" personality, cares for naruto specifically, would know WHO naruto really is, thus would understand how much of a SHAFTING the village is doing toward him, would NOT have any real ties to the village to be against naruto, and would ALSO know about naruto's "housing situation". You've made Tsunade bi-polar or something, first she's upset that Jiriaya wasn't teaching naruto, THEN worried about him, THEN wanting to leave the village (because she IS only back because of naruto), NOW she's having people spy on him? WHY? All he did was a "wrestling move" that konohamaru could have done easily and "flared his chakra" which any academy student should be able to do. So far, not anything really "spy on" level... She's flashing through personalities and motivations faster then she goes through bottles of booze. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So why even evaluate naruto for rank, IF HE'S GOING TO STAY LOWEST RANK? That doesn't even make sense! In fact it's STUPID... I don't can about "councils" or whatever.. This was a MAJOR stupidity point in canon and ff authors REALLY need to fix it, not CONTINUE THE STUPIDITY. Never understood in canon why people just didn't FLARE their chakra.. The sharringan is supposed to see and study chakra and focus on it and all that.. Then just simply flaring it, SHOULD blind the stupid thing.. Yet NOBODY in three entire series puts 2 2 together.. It's not like it's even that big of a deduction... Use smoke, use mist (the sharringan can't see through mist as stated in the zabuzza fight), use PEPPER SPRAY, flash bangs, strobe lights, ground glass, sand, dust, pollen, poison, acid, venom, There are about 1,000,000,000 things that could render the sharringan absolutely USELESS. I dunno why everyone thinks it's so IMPORTANT.. When basically a CIVILIAN could destroy the "great doujutsu" with a can of hair spray(2 dollars) and a lighter(50 cents)... If your "ultimate power" can be beaten by a civilian, with gear that would cost less then a movie ticket? It's most definitely NOT an "ultimate power". |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've always wondered.. Why in NONE of the stories on here (none I've read, I would love it, if someone could recommend some to prove me wrong) do these Hokages do ANYTHING.. They are supposed to be the highest in the land right? REALLY powerful in their own right, correct? So how come they essentially become "passengers" in these stories? Danzo? GET RID OF HIM... If not sarutobi (because of some weird loyalty and some odd relationship) then Tsunade who is NOT connected to him in any way... But ALSO supposedly enough to kill him with her bare hands.. She would NOT be arrested, thrown out OR EVEN STOPPED.. Sooooo...? The Council? Get rid of them same way... Jiraiya? Why is he NEVER, EVER "held accountable"? For ANYTHING? Yes he gets "beat up" but so what? That's like a "monday"... Nothing more...So I do not understand. If Tsunade is "SOOO WORRIED" about naruto? Promote him... Give him the rank he needs to announce his heritage.. That will protect him, because with Minato's enemies (that Konoha seems terrified of, for some reason) konoha also gets his ALLIES (which they have lost, or they wouldn't be so terrified).. Sarutobi SAID "he cared for naruto" but that's a load of dung.. He not only REVERSED THE ORDER on what he SHOULD have told people... (announcing his heritage, keeping the jinchuriki part a secret), but he ALSO put him on team 7 which is about the dumbest thing he could've done to him that he HADN'T already done. Then didn't FORCE jiraiya to come back(again, Jiraiya is NEVER held accountable) or even call Tsunade back. OR EVEN CALL IN Minato's "bodyguards". .. So again, how are ALL these HOKAGES so IMPOTENT? Isn't THIS the position danzo COVETS so much? If it's so "constrained" why does he want it? If it ISN'T, then MAKE THEM DO STUFF! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Holy crap I only made it part way to chapter 2 and this is one of the worst stories I've ever read |
![]() ![]() ![]() ahahahha oh lord how the turn tables |
![]() ![]() ![]() why does naruto sound like a road man |
![]() ![]() can goku have wives like sakura and hinata and wonder woman and black widow and supergirl and donna troy and hippolyta and aphrodite |
![]() ![]() ![]() bruh ... YOU ARE A 'CENSORED' LEGEND DUDE! PLEASE RETURN ALREADY OR IAMMA KICK YOUR ASS , DOUBLE TIME YOU HEAR ME! I WANT MORE FUCKING CONTENT! I CAN PAY, not tight now coz I am broke, BUT YEA~ Appreciate your work sir yours truly, obito uchiha |