Reviews for Twisted Mind
Fullmetal Embers chapter 19 . 12/9/2009
Ah! Such a cliffhanger. Update soon, yeah?
CrashnBurn chapter 19 . 12/9/2009
Oh, you got me in suspense! This is so good. :D
ToraYashaChan chapter 19 . 12/9/2009
gah *shakes fist* Damn you cliff hanger!

I hope you update soon D: I want to see what happens with Jack *flails*
WickedWitchoftheSE chapter 18 . 12/8/2009
at least they are learning...poor Ianto though he's not even really there! great job!
WickedWitchoftheSE chapter 15 . 12/3/2009
I don't like mean Ianto! can't wait to see how they fix this...good job!
CrashnBurn chapter 12 . 12/2/2009
Ooh. This is so good! Reads like an episode. I love it. Please update soon. :D
DarqueQueen7 chapter 12 . 12/2/2009
Wow...this gets better by the chapter! So, where is the real Ianto tucked in? And the young girl? That's the girl from next door in Penarth, right? And Martha's driving there to help...oh, please! Get that next chapter(s) soon!

Darque
DarqueQueen7 chapter 10 . 12/1/2009
O! Cliff-hanger! Mean cliff hanger at that! You have GOT to put up the next chapter SOON! Please? Waiting with baited breath...

Darque
Mc Parrot chapter 10 . 12/1/2009
Oh that is not a good sign hehe

good work. Nice strong story and I like Gwen not liking coincidences.
WickedWitchoftheSE chapter 10 . 12/1/2009
I don't like mean Ianto...great set of chapters though.
sympa chapter 8 . 11/29/2009
oh, I think that thing they found wasn't as harmless as the scanner suggested...

Seems like Jack just picked up something isn't right with Ianto. Hopefully he'll find out soon what it is and make it all better ;)

I love the story so far, great mixture between mystery and suspense and that little bit of romance :) Thank you for writing and uploading this!
Village-Mystic chapter 8 . 11/28/2009
Well.. looking to find out what actually is wrong. Thanks for sharing.
Village-Mystic chapter 7 . 11/28/2009
An interesting clue. If Ianto's mind has been compromised, maybe he's feeding just enough "false" information to whatever is controlling him to get Jack to notice, but not enough so that the entity can follow up with threats for mis-behavior?
Village-Mystic chapter 5 . 11/28/2009
Good division of labor. Nice cheerful but motivated boss.
Village-Mystic chapter 4 . 11/28/2009
Good real-world, real life details in this story.
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